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1/4/2003 c1 Guest
I was that tree... shit...
11/20/2002 c1 31Rizka
wonderful poem.

but...

"The lightning rips through the tree

The tree waves goodbye

And slowly and painfully

Dies"

did you put the word "waves" in there to show the innocence of the tree? cause it sorta interrupts the flow. oh well.

~me
11/18/2002 c1 rydiah
poor tree (*sob*)

sad . . .
11/17/2002 c1 64not sure yet
interesting, and very sad, but i like it, good job

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