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7/13/2005 c1 1The-Shadow-Kitsune
Only two reviews? Now that's just pathetic.This story is amazingly written- in quality.At the beginning it's very intruiging and deep- however, as it gets towards the last chapters I've noticed that it sort of wanes of into a sort of morbid embellishment of sherie's musings.Just a series of unfortunate events, and the behaviour of aaron was rather unbelievable in several parts.You also might want to put the last few chapters through spellcheck.Still, this story had me hooked- if you ever manage to finish and publish it, I'll buy the book.Lovely story, brooding , sad- but still.Deep.

-Shadow
1/8/2003 c9 53The Shady Crew
Very touching story. If you ever find that you've completely finished it, try to get it published; it's that good. In fact, it's one of the best stories I've read in a long time. So good job on impressing someone who isn't easily impressed!
12/14/2002 c5 8PaperLanterns
I can't believe you've had no reviews on this...it's pretty good. Well written, and all that good stuff. Keep up the good work

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