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12/3/2002 c1 2Ryyne
interesting...i wrote something somewhat similar to this once. ^^ great job, your poems really show what's in your heart.

-Ryne
11/24/2002 c1 100broken wings241
I like this... our Senior's had their graduation mass last week and ever since then I've been mulling over what it will be like when I leave... this sought of fits in with that, because my friends are sought of like the ones leading me and when we finish school it'll be like I suddenly have to walk all by myself... enough about me, I'm adding this to my favourites! I luv it ^_^!
11/23/2002 c1 41InkedinSin
interesting...strange flow because lines that rhyme change their order...it'll look better, and easier to read if it had some kind of punctuations...but it's a personal thing. Anyways..the poem is good.

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