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11/19/2003 c5 8Coquina D
That, my friend, is good.

You obviously know where it's heading, and you've obviously planned it out carefully. I love your style of writing, very direct and to the point. Well, that's all for my "constructive" review.

A'voir!
3/29/2003 c4 3Progeny of Darkness
Amazing story, even when it was slow you managed to hold it together with your characters. I can't wait till the next update!
12/26/2002 c3 8Coquina D
Again, another good chapter, though it is quite confusing. A lot more new characters, and blame me for the fact that I completely forgot what the first two chapters was about, hence, the consequence of me rereading them. Liked it very much.

~Eirien Ithilorn

(Changed pen name)
12/11/2002 c2 Coquina D
Very nicely written, especially the Council part. I should really learn from you. Keep up the good work, I'll be waiting.

~LightBlade
12/11/2002 c2 1cze
It's good, and you should write more. I've seen countless of stories with a decent beginning fall short because the writter doesn't continue with it. I hope you won't fall into that category.

-cze-
12/10/2002 c1 Kyouryoku Senshi
Good start but make it a little longer...

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