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1/18/2005 c1 32shadows of suburbia
You could never know how deeply these poems have affected me. the moment i finished reading "A beauty inside" i litterally lept up from my desk and fled t my room trying to repress the sobs that choked me because everyday when i walk into class (me being a high school freshman), this threatens to overwhelm me. i'm soory, i'm rambling. i just wanted to tell you how eloquently and beautifully you captured to emotions i've been trying to scribble on paper for so long. your poetry is beautiful. and i suppose it took me a bit by surprise that it struck so close to home. lovely, magnificent, beautiful...Tori
7/6/2004 c1 8White Summoner
Your poems are lovely and the use of imagery is great too.
4/29/2003 c1 19Aftertaste of a Razorblade
Aw *sigh* I love all of these.
12/28/2002 c1 8Edana
Oh my . . . poetry, can't write it for the life of me. But that first poem was so beautiful and tragic, OMG, where can I get your vocab? I just loved it very much despite the anguish, especially the imagery - shattering the glass: beautiful but dangerous shards, very clever conenction with love.

That poem had the biggest impact, but the last two were angsty with the use of pretty words. I especially liked the last stanza of 'Ill-timed Devotion' but still achingly sad. I really am choked up now . . .
12/16/2002 c1 Coolbou
All of the poems here are incredible - all very beautifully done - but "Requiem for a Glass Heart" really stands out to me. It's really beautiful...
11/24/2002 c1 588Setsuna529
For Requiem for a Glass Heart: The imagery and descriptions you used are very unique, beautiful, and impactful. Very nice.

For A Beauty Inside: Nice poem. I like the repitition of the first line in every stanza, and the last two lines were my favorites.

For Ill-timed Devotion: The phrase "And so I weep tears of pearls" is probably one of the most beautiful lines I've ever read. Your poetry is very good, and I can relate to the whole unrequited love theme. Very nice work.
11/24/2002 c1 83Nails For Your Crucifix
I really like this. I know what unrequited love is like. I especially like Requiem for a Glass Heart. Just my thoughts

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