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4/19/2005 c1 8Love Me CrayziE
hello there! first off i want to thank you for your review- i was hoping there might be some good ol' brand new fans out there :)-(im in love with them), im glad you got something out of it. i kinda based the story over the song, (this stories old but it goes on and on..) only its backwards, because this story is..not even new, its in the future. hasnt happened yet. but anyway it was my 'background music' for the story. (tho most of it's gotta do with my life, really). anywho enough about me. this poem makes me feel like i'm not the only one with careless rhyme schemes. which is cool. i also change the rhymes all the time. and i like the whole concept of the poem, which is not the typical 'i love you betty' poem you usually see on fictionpress. good job, and as always: keep writing like you cant ever stop.

1/12/2004 c1 3Eternal Savior
This one is my fav. of your poems! I like how you used the words to discribe. This also would be a wonderful poem to go with Naruto-kun!
1/20/2003 c1 maz17
wow.. it's beautiful! I don't know what else to say about it, it's simply beautiful, you're a good writer!

Love Mystic
11/25/2002 c1 33XXiniquityXX
Very beautiful and majestic. I really like this. The only thing is, it seems as if it doesn't have a "finished feeling" towards the end... like it could go on and on forever, yet still bring more emotion. *Shrugs* I dunno, just a notion. Anyway, superb job! Keep up the fantastic work!

~ Moony of Spoons

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