for Guardian Angel12/9/2002 c9 Slim not signed in
::perks up:: New chapter! The sweetness.
I like the way you describe Mark and Greg and develop their characters with details such as how they eat . . . Very good chapter. Write more soon!
*slim*
::perks up:: New chapter! The sweetness.
I like the way you describe Mark and Greg and develop their characters with details such as how they eat . . . Very good chapter. Write more soon!
*slim*
12/9/2002 c8 Slim
I love you for making that work out. I seriously thought something bad was going to happen, like Adam might not make it . . Well, he's alright for the time-being so I'm glad. ^-^ hehe anyways, this is am amazing story . . . Can't wait for more.
*slim*
I love you for making that work out. I seriously thought something bad was going to happen, like Adam might not make it . . Well, he's alright for the time-being so I'm glad. ^-^ hehe anyways, this is am amazing story . . . Can't wait for more.
*slim*
12/8/2002 c8 
1mistressofterror
Another good chapter. Your going to keep me guessing till the end aren't you? Cancer is a really nasty thing.
1mistressofterrorAnother good chapter. Your going to keep me guessing till the end aren't you? Cancer is a really nasty thing.
12/8/2002 c8 Lorie
Can you make me cry anymore? =) Haha... Great, great, great =) I love this, so, so much =) Keep it up!
Can you make me cry anymore? =) Haha... Great, great, great =) I love this, so, so much =) Keep it up!
12/7/2002 c7 mistressofterror
Oh that's unfair! I love the plot though. Now I get to sit here and wonder where you are going with it...
Oh that's unfair! I love the plot though. Now I get to sit here and wonder where you are going with it...
12/7/2002 c7 Slim not signed in
Breathtakingly amazing . . . (does that make sense?¿?¿) Yet sad. I wasn't expecting that to happen . . . I really hope Adam is okay. ::looks around worriedly:: write more soon . . .
*slim* . . .
Breathtakingly amazing . . . (does that make sense?¿?¿) Yet sad. I wasn't expecting that to happen . . . I really hope Adam is okay. ::looks around worriedly:: write more soon . . .
*slim* . . .
12/7/2002 c7 suicide-is-painless
oh my fucking god!
this is such a good story! i'm glad they're together now.
but adam has cancer? how sad!
keep writing! it's so good!
oh my fucking god!
this is such a good story! i'm glad they're together now.
but adam has cancer? how sad!
keep writing! it's so good!
12/7/2002 c7 LeighLorie
*goes and gets another tissue* Wow... I wasn't expect that. Thats... wow... Surprise ending, right there. Thats great way to do it, but oh so sad. =/
This chapter wasnt as confusing as the last, and the story line is, still, great =) Keep it up!
*goes and gets another tissue* Wow... I wasn't expect that. Thats... wow... Surprise ending, right there. Thats great way to do it, but oh so sad. =/
This chapter wasnt as confusing as the last, and the story line is, still, great =) Keep it up!
12/7/2002 c6 LeighLorie
=( I don't want to happen! Nooo! Haha =) I like that though, you take what I want to happen and totaly change it so it will stay interesting, and its not like every other story =)
=( I don't want to happen! Nooo! Haha =) I like that though, you take what I want to happen and totaly change it so it will stay interesting, and its not like every other story =)
12/7/2002 c5 LeighLorie
I will admit, that this chapter was a tad confusing. The next time you jump scene, with the same characters, maybe have more than one line in between the paragraphs =) It's just a suggestion =) The story line is going great though =)! Great Job!
I will admit, that this chapter was a tad confusing. The next time you jump scene, with the same characters, maybe have more than one line in between the paragraphs =) It's just a suggestion =) The story line is going great though =)! Great Job!
12/7/2002 c4 LeighLorie
I like how you have made this chapter lead into the next, making me desperatly want to read what happens next =) Some times, authors tend to end a chapter flatly making it seems to conclude the *whole piece*. Who wants to read the next part when it feels like the ending just happened? Great job =)
I like how you have made this chapter lead into the next, making me desperatly want to read what happens next =) Some times, authors tend to end a chapter flatly making it seems to conclude the *whole piece*. Who wants to read the next part when it feels like the ending just happened? Great job =)
12/6/2002 c3 Leigh
How well you choose your words, leaving things open for me to think about, yet guiding me into how you want it to be interpreted =)
How well you choose your words, leaving things open for me to think about, yet guiding me into how you want it to be interpreted =)
12/6/2002 c2 Leigh
I love it how you make me see how he is possibly hurting James, but not letting me care, because you have me so wrapped up in the main characters emotions =) You're great =)
I love it how you make me see how he is possibly hurting James, but not letting me care, because you have me so wrapped up in the main characters emotions =) You're great =)
12/6/2002 c1 Leigh
*bottom lip trembles*
*tears form in eyes*
*gets a tissue*
=) As I am sure you know from other review that this piece is great... When one can make a reader laugh or cry or upset by there work, a reader forgets they are reading. And when a reader forgets they are reading, you know it is a truely good piece =) I can't wait to read more... =)
*bottom lip trembles*
*tears form in eyes*
*gets a tissue*
=) As I am sure you know from other review that this piece is great... When one can make a reader laugh or cry or upset by there work, a reader forgets they are reading. And when a reader forgets they are reading, you know it is a truely good piece =) I can't wait to read more... =)