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2012/4/2002 c6 PseudoBohemian
Agghhhhhh!
Angst, such angst! It's much easier to read now you've sorted the layout, thanks! Keep going mate!
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Agghhhhhh!
Angst, such angst! It's much easier to read now you've sorted the layout, thanks! Keep going mate!
P
12/3/2002 c6 Slim not signed in
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This is truly a beautiful story . . . I love everything about it. ::hesitates:: I'm starting to really like Adam again, lol. But what about James? ::looks around nervously:: Well I guess I'll see soon. Write more!
Btw, thanks for reading my stuff. Your reviews are lovely. ^-^
*slim*
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This is truly a beautiful story . . . I love everything about it. ::hesitates:: I'm starting to really like Adam again, lol. But what about James? ::looks around nervously:: Well I guess I'll see soon. Write more!
Btw, thanks for reading my stuff. Your reviews are lovely. ^-^
*slim*
12/2/2002 c5 Slim not signed in
Yay! You updated!
I absolutely love this story, it's so sweet and angsty. Can't wait to see which choice John makes . . . although I'm assuming he's going to take Adam back, which might cause some problems between him and James. Hmm. ::grins:: I just love guessing what's going to happen next in stories . . . although I know I'll adore what ever you decide will happen. Great story. Write more soon!
*slim*
Yay! You updated!
I absolutely love this story, it's so sweet and angsty. Can't wait to see which choice John makes . . . although I'm assuming he's going to take Adam back, which might cause some problems between him and James. Hmm. ::grins:: I just love guessing what's going to happen next in stories . . . although I know I'll adore what ever you decide will happen. Great story. Write more soon!
*slim*
12/2/2002 c4 Slim
Damn you left me hangin there! I want to know what happens next. ::grumbles:: Evil . . . ^.~ Write more soon!
*slim*
Damn you left me hangin there! I want to know what happens next. ::grumbles:: Evil . . . ^.~ Write more soon!
*slim*
12/2/2002 c3 Slim
Sad and happy at the same time . . . I like that combination. I love the way you describe their emotions, it's so true that the one you love the most can also be the one you hate more than anything . . . I can still see John taking Adam back, although I like him and James better. ^-^
*slim*
Sad and happy at the same time . . . I like that combination. I love the way you describe their emotions, it's so true that the one you love the most can also be the one you hate more than anything . . . I can still see John taking Adam back, although I like him and James better. ^-^
*slim*
12/2/2002 c2 Slim
Whee! I read chapter 1 last night and I was going to review, but I was just so curious to find out what happened next that I skipped on to chapter 2 . . . Forgive me! lol Anyhow, this is an amazing story so far. Your characters are so cute . . . Especially James. lol. But I still think he should get back together with Adam. Well I'll be off to read the next chapter!
*slim*
Whee! I read chapter 1 last night and I was going to review, but I was just so curious to find out what happened next that I skipped on to chapter 2 . . . Forgive me! lol Anyhow, this is an amazing story so far. Your characters are so cute . . . Especially James. lol. But I still think he should get back together with Adam. Well I'll be off to read the next chapter!
*slim*
12/1/2002 c3 PseudoBohemian
Hey, thanks for the review by the way, bud.
It's a nicely written story, although difficult to follow at points due to the layout. I like the interplay of the characters, and the cleverly written bits in the first chapter - about murderers, pointless introductions and so on...
Peace out ^^
Pseudo
Hey, thanks for the review by the way, bud.
It's a nicely written story, although difficult to follow at points due to the layout. I like the interplay of the characters, and the cleverly written bits in the first chapter - about murderers, pointless introductions and so on...
Peace out ^^
Pseudo
11/28/2002 c1 LunarGlow20
This story is so sweet, and you are such a talented writer. You seriously know the mechanics of the English language very well. I admire your writing style very much. It seems very fresh. I hope that you will add another chapter to this story.
Also, good luck on future updates.
Peace and Love
This story is so sweet, and you are such a talented writer. You seriously know the mechanics of the English language very well. I admire your writing style very much. It seems very fresh. I hope that you will add another chapter to this story.
Also, good luck on future updates.
Peace and Love
11/28/2002 c1 NoName8owq
I really like this story so far, but I think you should slow the pace a bit, everything happened so fast! Also, if you did it on purpose to rush into a new chapter, I think you did a great job. I really want to tell you how much I can relate to your main character and how his pain seems real. Until another chapter, I'll be keepin my I on you! xoxo
I really like this story so far, but I think you should slow the pace a bit, everything happened so fast! Also, if you did it on purpose to rush into a new chapter, I think you did a great job. I really want to tell you how much I can relate to your main character and how his pain seems real. Until another chapter, I'll be keepin my I on you! xoxo