for Resurrecting Death3/5/2003 c3 
55Creative Deficit
o good! i liked it. but why does she care if Jena is pretty or not? popular, one thing, but pretty, i dunno, it doesn't seem entirely realistic. but thats just me!
super story, i really like it. will have to read more! but now, there is history class to deal with.
55Creative Deficito good! i liked it. but why does she care if Jena is pretty or not? popular, one thing, but pretty, i dunno, it doesn't seem entirely realistic. but thats just me!
super story, i really like it. will have to read more! but now, there is history class to deal with.
3/5/2003 c2 Creative Deficit
o, the plot is getting thicker. a! more more. hush, i'm reading!
laura
oh by the way, i love the part saying there were 5 kids, but only a few were important. yea. bye
o, the plot is getting thicker. a! more more. hush, i'm reading!
laura
oh by the way, i love the part saying there were 5 kids, but only a few were important. yea. bye
2/19/2003 c1 Creative Deficit
so far so good! can't wait to read more! teehee. i'm a slacker, too. and that makes people angry that i get good grades without any effort (hey, i'm good at sliding by and cheesing it *shrug*)
will have to read more.
Laura
so far so good! can't wait to read more! teehee. i'm a slacker, too. and that makes people angry that i get good grades without any effort (hey, i'm good at sliding by and cheesing it *shrug*)
will have to read more.
Laura
1/28/2003 c7 5Crunch
Hmm, this looks like a very promising story! Really, I like your writing style. I just wanted to read your story because of the review you gave me (not quite sure if it was a good or bad review, but the critique was very appreciated either way) And I think you're definately a talented writer. WEll, keep writing!
*Crunch*
5CrunchHmm, this looks like a very promising story! Really, I like your writing style. I just wanted to read your story because of the review you gave me (not quite sure if it was a good or bad review, but the critique was very appreciated either way) And I think you're definately a talented writer. WEll, keep writing!
*Crunch*
1/12/2003 c6 7IveTheory
^_^ Great story. I got hooked by the second chapter. Keep writing it. Though, that the main character shows such a disguist in bisexuals, it nerve me somewhat.
7IveTheory^_^ Great story. I got hooked by the second chapter. Keep writing it. Though, that the main character shows such a disguist in bisexuals, it nerve me somewhat.
1/10/2003 c6 43James Rain
Hello, thsi si my review.
I think that you handled the subject of discovering a friends sexuality very maturely. I definitely know how weird it is when you find out a friend's sexuality. Anyway, i also thought that you added some great little comedy in it. Very good.
43James RainHello, thsi si my review.
I think that you handled the subject of discovering a friends sexuality very maturely. I definitely know how weird it is when you find out a friend's sexuality. Anyway, i also thought that you added some great little comedy in it. Very good.
1/5/2003 c5 17Jade6
And I finally return and review, lol. I am sorry it has taken me so long but I got side tracked on my holidays, lol.
Anyway, another wonderfully written chapter. It is building suspence for the party that is to come and I hope you post the next chapter soon!
Take Care
Jade
17Jade6And I finally return and review, lol. I am sorry it has taken me so long but I got side tracked on my holidays, lol.
Anyway, another wonderfully written chapter. It is building suspence for the party that is to come and I hope you post the next chapter soon!
Take Care
Jade
1/3/2003 c5 43James Rain
Good, but I want some death
j/k
Anyway, thanks for reviewing, but that stiry is going to be on the back burner. Anyway again, I hope this continueds. it's very well written and you have a good sense of characters.
43James RainGood, but I want some death
j/k
Anyway, thanks for reviewing, but that stiry is going to be on the back burner. Anyway again, I hope this continueds. it's very well written and you have a good sense of characters.
12/21/2002 c1 Amber92
Man, you are so dumb. First off my story wasn't meant to be good. Either you read it or you don't. Other people might think its good. Second you stories are so funny because they suck. They suck a lot. My story is fine to me. Your stories suck to me. That's just what I think. So go cry to somebody else, crybaby.
Man, you are so dumb. First off my story wasn't meant to be good. Either you read it or you don't. Other people might think its good. Second you stories are so funny because they suck. They suck a lot. My story is fine to me. Your stories suck to me. That's just what I think. So go cry to somebody else, crybaby.
12/21/2002 c4 Redux
You've got something going here...where's the rest? Your writing is good, a conversational style...a few typos here and there, not many. Characters are interesting. You don't really give much about Jena, but she's not staying the way she was when you introduced her and that's good. But Christy isn't doing much at all...IM me for an explanation.
So, are you going to finish this? heheh, just tell me when you do, I would like to read it.
REDUX
You've got something going here...where's the rest? Your writing is good, a conversational style...a few typos here and there, not many. Characters are interesting. You don't really give much about Jena, but she's not staying the way she was when you introduced her and that's good. But Christy isn't doing much at all...IM me for an explanation.
So, are you going to finish this? heheh, just tell me when you do, I would like to read it.
REDUX
12/21/2002 c1 Guest
this shit sucks.
this shit sucks.
12/6/2002 c4 Jade
Hey!
Another chapter! When did you post this. I was sort of just looking to see if there was anything to read and then saw that there was now four chapters... got all excited and read. I have my bio lab exam in an hour so I am sort of acting wierd, lol... pre lab stress... anyway, this story helped me escape that for a little while so thanks.
Wonderfully done as always and I cannot wait for the party scene next. It is being kept so mysterious that I am just dying of curiousity. Post it quickly!
Jade
Hey!
Another chapter! When did you post this. I was sort of just looking to see if there was anything to read and then saw that there was now four chapters... got all excited and read. I have my bio lab exam in an hour so I am sort of acting wierd, lol... pre lab stress... anyway, this story helped me escape that for a little while so thanks.
Wonderfully done as always and I cannot wait for the party scene next. It is being kept so mysterious that I am just dying of curiousity. Post it quickly!
Jade
11/30/2002 c3 Jade guess who
Don't you wish that the easiest excuses actually worked. Have you ever tried to use "the dog ate my homework" excuse? Want to know a funny but pointless story. When my dog was teething she really did like to eat paper. She was really big on books and we have many hardcovered novels that have had corners chewed off on our shelves. Anyway, one day she really did chew up my homework and only a note from my mother made the teacher actually believe me, lol... anyway, like I said it was a pointless story...
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The first day of school always sucks... getting lost going to classes and not knowing anyone... always a nightmare..
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Oh! Don't cry! Don't you just hate days like that. Where everything seems to go wrong... poor her.
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OK, Now Jena is making fun of her and calling her "fishy"... I didn't much like her last chapter but now I am SURE I don't like her... *glares at mental picture of Jena*... ok, I am getting way to involved in this, lol...
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Please tell me Jena gets what she deserves in the end of this story... *puppy eyes*
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Please slap her... pretty or no!
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I don't like Wendy's food... I went there last weekend and the checkout girl was high or something (maybe just stupid) and they were out of fries if you can believe that. How can a fast food place be out of fries?
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Did she steel the purse?
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Please if you main character does not hit her can I?
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Hope Christy doesn't get more then she barginned for at this party. Poor girl... at that age you just want to fit in no matter what is asked of you... I look forward to more and think it is cool you eat ketchup with pizza... I will have to try it sometime, lol.
Jade
Don't you wish that the easiest excuses actually worked. Have you ever tried to use "the dog ate my homework" excuse? Want to know a funny but pointless story. When my dog was teething she really did like to eat paper. She was really big on books and we have many hardcovered novels that have had corners chewed off on our shelves. Anyway, one day she really did chew up my homework and only a note from my mother made the teacher actually believe me, lol... anyway, like I said it was a pointless story...
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The first day of school always sucks... getting lost going to classes and not knowing anyone... always a nightmare..
~
Oh! Don't cry! Don't you just hate days like that. Where everything seems to go wrong... poor her.
~
OK, Now Jena is making fun of her and calling her "fishy"... I didn't much like her last chapter but now I am SURE I don't like her... *glares at mental picture of Jena*... ok, I am getting way to involved in this, lol...
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Please tell me Jena gets what she deserves in the end of this story... *puppy eyes*
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Please slap her... pretty or no!
~
I don't like Wendy's food... I went there last weekend and the checkout girl was high or something (maybe just stupid) and they were out of fries if you can believe that. How can a fast food place be out of fries?
~
Did she steel the purse?
~
Please if you main character does not hit her can I?
~
Hope Christy doesn't get more then she barginned for at this party. Poor girl... at that age you just want to fit in no matter what is asked of you... I look forward to more and think it is cool you eat ketchup with pizza... I will have to try it sometime, lol.
Jade