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10/26/2003 c1 33charcoal wings
thats really good. i love it.
7/6/2003 c1 nolongerinuse
I can relate with you so well, I loved your first stanza. You really struck a chord. Straight from the heart.
7/2/2001 c1 Jo-Anne
i loved that one to

so far its my fav.
4/30/2001 c1 4canadian-teen
Great! Ya got potential! I don't see what they can accuse you of when you write like this!
12/10/2000 c1 kevin
its.. interesting? lol
12/2/2000 c1 32Witchl3itch
that was good, just, dont slit your wrists please, and if you do decide to, I'LL HAND YOU THE KNIFE! YEAH! jk, yeah, ok, i'll just hit enter now...
11/22/2000 c1 4Pheonix182
Like it, rhythem (spelled wrong of course) is gone from your poem, but when read aloud in the right way-like only i can ;) -wel then it's great. can't wait to see what you do to a limerick. ;)
11/11/2000 c1 Tony
I read this about 5 times and i think its great. if you think about it,it could be made into a really good song! i love it

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