for The Feelings12/5/2002 c1 
9PonoKyunin
wow... i can't say anymore.. the vivid imagery (crap i can't seem to spell that word right tonight..) well anyways... i like it.. words that you use produce a very effective emotion.
9PonoKyuninwow... i can't say anymore.. the vivid imagery (crap i can't seem to spell that word right tonight..) well anyways... i like it.. words that you use produce a very effective emotion.
11/30/2002 c1 7Avokataran
There's that glimmer of hope at the end...
I hope I can continue to be there for you when things get rough, sweety. The ending shows that you're strong and withholding against the evils, and there's a deep message in this. Great work, and keep it up. :) -Avo (aka Orikal24's love)
7AvokataranThere's that glimmer of hope at the end...
I hope I can continue to be there for you when things get rough, sweety. The ending shows that you're strong and withholding against the evils, and there's a deep message in this. Great work, and keep it up. :) -Avo (aka Orikal24's love)
11/30/2002 c1 39Queenofrefuse
Your use of description clearly creates an amazing feeling of pain and despair, and it's nice to leave the reader with hope at the end. Great job!
39QueenofrefuseYour use of description clearly creates an amazing feeling of pain and despair, and it's nice to leave the reader with hope at the end. Great job!