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3/4/2003 c1 119Silent Dreamer
i know exactly how you feel! i like this poem loads.
3/3/2003 c1 lami
very nice. i went through that at one point, so (i don't wanna calim to understand compleatly) but i know what you're talking about. the last stanza conveys some sort of exeptance of your life the way it is, and a hope you were just in a bad mood whan you wrote this, because, if you're not happy with a situation, you should never give up trying to change it. never let anyone make you believe you're not worth the effort.

luv, Travis.

ps:thanks for your review for 'key.' i'll post some more tonight. damn html..gr.
1/22/2003 c1 Emotionless
Splendid poem.
12/30/2002 c1 6limonada
Your poem is very good. It is so sad...but it touches the heart.

I think that you and I are in similar situations. I hope you feel better since you wrote this. Please ^_^
12/19/2002 c1 1Chibi-Yukito
that was depressing. much like myself actually. keep writing poems, your not bad. comapred to me, your edgar allen poe! i acnt write poetry for shit, but your good at it. ^_^

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