
1/8/2008 c1
20Twilight Starr
Good start. Nice work. Good luck with writing, this story, and life. Have an excellent day.
~Twilight Starr~

Good start. Nice work. Good luck with writing, this story, and life. Have an excellent day.
~Twilight Starr~
10/29/2003 c8 wacka dkid
you have a very wonderful way of making readers cringe with embarrasment for the characters ^_^. your story is awesome. hope you update soon
you have a very wonderful way of making readers cringe with embarrasment for the characters ^_^. your story is awesome. hope you update soon
8/31/2003 c8
3SKACHICK
hey! great story! i like it! not much description on the characters tho...try and describe them more often like their clothes...hair color..eye color...etc.. u know what i'm saying lol...but yeah good story :-D

hey! great story! i like it! not much description on the characters tho...try and describe them more often like their clothes...hair color..eye color...etc.. u know what i'm saying lol...but yeah good story :-D
4/15/2003 c8 Scattycat
Eve,
I'm afraid I'm a little late in reading this story but I just wanna let you know how much I throughly enjoyed reading this. This story is very refreshing to read it's great to find something so comical and very well written.
I love how your two main character's are trying to ajust to one another. Is it me or can I see Jude and Harlem together...?
I hope you update soon, I'm so dying to know what other Trick's Harlem has in store for Jude.
Take care
Hugz
SC
Eve,
I'm afraid I'm a little late in reading this story but I just wanna let you know how much I throughly enjoyed reading this. This story is very refreshing to read it's great to find something so comical and very well written.
I love how your two main character's are trying to ajust to one another. Is it me or can I see Jude and Harlem together...?
I hope you update soon, I'm so dying to know what other Trick's Harlem has in store for Jude.
Take care
Hugz
SC
1/17/2003 c8 princess of the desert
are you gonna finish this soon?
are you gonna finish this soon?
1/16/2003 c8
37kittyfay
Ohk, i hope u update soon!
i really like this story, and i want Harlem and Jude should get together!
PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE?
well neways.
continue soon!

Ohk, i hope u update soon!
i really like this story, and i want Harlem and Jude should get together!
PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE?
well neways.
continue soon!
1/16/2003 c6 kittyfay
ok,
so at this point, im wanting Harlem and Jude to get together!
i mean they are only STEP bro and sis.
and Jude seems to have more in depth about him then Caleb
so im gonna continue reading now...
ok,
so at this point, im wanting Harlem and Jude to get together!
i mean they are only STEP bro and sis.
and Jude seems to have more in depth about him then Caleb
so im gonna continue reading now...
1/9/2003 c8 Senna
I'm weird. I think Jude and Harlem would be a cute couple. They're not ACTUALLY related, after all. Yes, I know there's something wrong with me. Good story, though.
I'm weird. I think Jude and Harlem would be a cute couple. They're not ACTUALLY related, after all. Yes, I know there's something wrong with me. Good story, though.
1/3/2003 c8
2krazy-cutie-chic
yay! lol anne and jude are getting along rather nicely haha, i still have to review the last chapter of protection so im off! lol good chapter tho
mich

yay! lol anne and jude are getting along rather nicely haha, i still have to review the last chapter of protection so im off! lol good chapter tho
mich
1/3/2003 c7 Michelle
ahhh ok hi! lol i know where have i been? lol my ff.net was being very odd lately but i think it fixed itself, lol i have the nxt chapter to read but i DID like this chapter, and i still do lol anndd wants gonna happen in between jude and her friend? lol
mich
ahhh ok hi! lol i know where have i been? lol my ff.net was being very odd lately but i think it fixed itself, lol i have the nxt chapter to read but i DID like this chapter, and i still do lol anndd wants gonna happen in between jude and her friend? lol
mich
12/30/2002 c7
4Pandemonium
"I remembered that I was supposed to be leaving Caleb alone, and then frowned" - pfft... I'd happily break that resolve... *g*
Umm... MR. cow? ha!
Lmao - eat the hat! eat the hat!

"I remembered that I was supposed to be leaving Caleb alone, and then frowned" - pfft... I'd happily break that resolve... *g*
Umm... MR. cow? ha!
Lmao - eat the hat! eat the hat!
12/30/2002 c6 Pandemonium
Well... I think I preferred Jude when he wasn't acting human... lol
*onwards to the next bit*
Well... I think I preferred Jude when he wasn't acting human... lol
*onwards to the next bit*
12/30/2002 c6
32Cryptic Insanity
She got trmapled by...by...by...sheep!
*doubles over in laughter*
If only I could whitness that in real life *laughs harder*
Woooo,this story is great!You must update soon!

She got trmapled by...by...by...sheep!
*doubles over in laughter*
If only I could whitness that in real life *laughs harder*
Woooo,this story is great!You must update soon!
12/30/2002 c6 Michelle
THERE GETTING ALONGGGGG! YAYYYYY! lol much to my pleasure u updated fast! :D:D:D haha, and im glad to see them getting along liek the typical bro and sis. Good chapter update again soon!
mich
THERE GETTING ALONGGGGG! YAYYYYY! lol much to my pleasure u updated fast! :D:D:D haha, and im glad to see them getting along liek the typical bro and sis. Good chapter update again soon!
mich