
12/5/2002 c2
4RJ LeCouteur
I love the way you're developing her character, it's extremely believable. I also like you're technique of using hindsight, i really want to know what comes next, and how she evolves into self-desctruction. Keep writing!

I love the way you're developing her character, it's extremely believable. I also like you're technique of using hindsight, i really want to know what comes next, and how she evolves into self-desctruction. Keep writing!
12/1/2002 c1 RJ LeCouteur
This is off to a really good start, I'm extremely interested, keep posting!
This is off to a really good start, I'm extremely interested, keep posting!
12/1/2002 c1 Anna Vashdalal
Oi, but when what started? please update soon. this is really really good. It's sad though. Stupid girls. mean little camper bitches.
Oi, but when what started? please update soon. this is really really good. It's sad though. Stupid girls. mean little camper bitches.