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10/31/2005 c2 38SassyLil'Thunderstorm
Hehe...and I thought I wrote evil stuff...its definetely fiery...and that's me so you know I love it...
6/26/2003 c2 31Cindy Moon
More power to ya pplz
6/17/2003 c1 12Spanish Amor
haha

thought about doing those things too many times, to too many ppl

pop a cap in yo ass,

ha how you like that bitch?

... too many times...
6/14/2003 c1 200Ashes of a Willow
I loved the ending! It wrapped up very nicely!
5/17/2003 c2 9Sarina Fannel
marvolose..
5/17/2003 c1 Sarina Fannel
interseting peice..
5/16/2003 c1 4DaughterofDeath
gory, good
4/19/2003 c1 173Meisyria
This is one cool ass poem. I like it cause it sounds like a hot freestyle. Keep it up.
4/15/2003 c1 13Erotica Within
hey, what sup? Thanks for the review.. i thought I'd check some of your stuff out too. I liked this poem, reminds me of highschool back when I went.. then I dropped out.. lol oops. Oh well. Real good.. i'll read more laters...
3/24/2003 c2 4DarkestHeart
oh, I sense school grounds here! And you know what? Things never change! Stick with this attitude and you'll do well! Keep up the good work!

DH
3/7/2003 c1 12jae.ni
nice..! u have this rhyme thing goin on girl! this could make a really good rap song.. =D
1/18/2003 c1 31Cindy Moon
yep... these r them cheerleaders at mai school

^^ good job with this one. Keep writing neh?

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