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5/8/2003 c1 1Elij
Your expressions of anger and hurt are vivid.

One nit in the second last line for the sake of making it flow better...I think it could be "I will take my independence" But that is my personal opinion, so take it or leave it.

Good!

Nicole (Elij) :-)
1/18/2003 c1 DF8
Wow! Great poem! ^.^ Lotsa emotion...I love that...anyways, I don't really know what to write, so I'll stop here. *sweatdrop* Keep writing! You're a great poet! ^.^

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