for She11/15/2003 c1 
5Adenosine Triphosphate
That made me cry. I've been that way for so long. No one sees me, no one cares. I'm not a follower, of\r a leader, I'm just...there. With that talent you've got, you shold never be treated that way. Take care.
-Ari
5Adenosine TriphosphateThat made me cry. I've been that way for so long. No one sees me, no one cares. I'm not a follower, of\r a leader, I'm just...there. With that talent you've got, you shold never be treated that way. Take care.
-Ari
6/6/2003 c1 7Unhappily Neverafter
Brit: *is thinking about it, with a smile*
Kristi: wholey shit! You got Brit THINKGING! You get a cookie for that even! Damn! Good job!
7Unhappily NeverafterBrit: *is thinking about it, with a smile*
Kristi: wholey shit! You got Brit THINKGING! You get a cookie for that even! Damn! Good job!
4/19/2003 c1 3nothing123
that was good! That was fookin good! I'd pay to write like that. Man, woah, good.
3nothing123that was good! That was fookin good! I'd pay to write like that. Man, woah, good.
12/21/2002 c1 nix
ive read this about 5 times now and each time it sinks in more getting more and more meaningful,u have a lot of talent lil gurl keep writing xxx
ive read this about 5 times now and each time it sinks in more getting more and more meaningful,u have a lot of talent lil gurl keep writing xxx
12/11/2002 c1 here
wow
wow
12/9/2002 c1 tim
just wann say this poem moved me dont stop writing eva.
just wann say this poem moved me dont stop writing eva.
12/9/2002 c1 Guest
vix there all propa gud but that kicked ass by far wen u post sum new 1z tell me n il check em out xxxx
vix there all propa gud but that kicked ass by far wen u post sum new 1z tell me n il check em out xxxx
12/5/2002 c1 11MistressMoriana
Wow, sad story. I really liked it though, especially when you said, "She just exists, you can’t call her living."
11MistressMorianaWow, sad story. I really liked it though, especially when you said, "She just exists, you can’t call her living."
12/5/2002 c1 No Longer Posting Here
that kicked major ass. yesh, i think people like that (ME COUGH) need to be noticed more. no i will never tell people what are my problems. good poem anyways. there were a few words that didn't make sense in it (ex: you said 'are' instead of 'is') but it was still very good. i loved it. i truly did.
~GeN!
that kicked major ass. yesh, i think people like that (ME COUGH) need to be noticed more. no i will never tell people what are my problems. good poem anyways. there were a few words that didn't make sense in it (ex: you said 'are' instead of 'is') but it was still very good. i loved it. i truly did.
~GeN!
12/5/2002 c1 9LukesDragon
Cool poem, sad, deep and angsty. I'll look forward to seeing some more poems from you :)
9LukesDragonCool poem, sad, deep and angsty. I'll look forward to seeing some more poems from you :)