for Dead12/5/2002 c1 
12hobocamp
you are truly "writing down the bones" with this concise and inspiring piece. remember, the shorter a piece is, the more likely it is to be read, and this piece guarantees not only a read with its brevity, but a strong reaction from the intense pictoral description. -the voice of Ms. Schur in my head
This is a snapshot in poem form. -my own voice in my head
12hobocampyou are truly "writing down the bones" with this concise and inspiring piece. remember, the shorter a piece is, the more likely it is to be read, and this piece guarantees not only a read with its brevity, but a strong reaction from the intense pictoral description. -the voice of Ms. Schur in my head
This is a snapshot in poem form. -my own voice in my head