for Running9/3/2005 c1 Arkash
Hi there,
I could of sworn I read this before. I wouldn't forget Hazel and her predicament. I still like it. Good Job! *_*
Hi there,
I could of sworn I read this before. I wouldn't forget Hazel and her predicament. I still like it. Good Job! *_*
7/26/2003 c8 AVIGON
"Running" eh? Well, it's an interesting enough concept, but I think we'd love to learn more about Them for a change. Some of the chapters need some work (typos, etc.), but other than that it's good.
"Running" eh? Well, it's an interesting enough concept, but I think we'd love to learn more about Them for a change. Some of the chapters need some work (typos, etc.), but other than that it's good.
7/17/2003 c8 
6Silver-Dragon5
Well you seem to be doing pretty well without the need for you friend! ;) I hope that you can keep up the writing because I, obviously, am not the only one that loves your story.
Silver~
6Silver-Dragon5Well you seem to be doing pretty well without the need for you friend! ;) I hope that you can keep up the writing because I, obviously, am not the only one that loves your story.
Silver~
6/9/2003 c7 no-more-account
Good job. Nice turn in the plot and incorporation of new characters into it as well. Please keep it up! ^^
Good job. Nice turn in the plot and incorporation of new characters into it as well. Please keep it up! ^^
4/23/2003 c7 2kalilza
I like Ryth already, he seems so funny for some reason, I don't know why, could just be me though. I can't wait to see what happens next. Write,write, write.
2kalilzaI like Ryth already, he seems so funny for some reason, I don't know why, could just be me though. I can't wait to see what happens next. Write,write, write.
4/23/2003 c7 58Zeekie
This is really great, you have 2 keep up the writing. Just a couple of questions:
1) Whatever happened to Mischa?
2) What are the powers of the guys Hazel met in the woods?
3) What was Hazel's mom's power?
Just a little curious...anyway, keep writing, I have to know what happens next!
58ZeekieThis is really great, you have 2 keep up the writing. Just a couple of questions:
1) Whatever happened to Mischa?
2) What are the powers of the guys Hazel met in the woods?
3) What was Hazel's mom's power?
Just a little curious...anyway, keep writing, I have to know what happens next!
4/19/2003 c6 7AngelFire2
Geez, it's LONG enough, but i love it! you should seriously try to get it published. Keep it up! you have a talent!
~*~AngelFire~*~
7AngelFire2Geez, it's LONG enough, but i love it! you should seriously try to get it published. Keep it up! you have a talent!
~*~AngelFire~*~
4/14/2003 c6 20Xi
1. srry haven't been writing
2. this is getting better and better by the chapter...BUT COULD WE KNOE MORE ABOUT 'THEM'?
3. IS Mischa okies?
20Xi1. srry haven't been writing
2. this is getting better and better by the chapter...BUT COULD WE KNOE MORE ABOUT 'THEM'?
3. IS Mischa okies?
3/31/2003 c1 2arrowhead
wonderful. interesting. nice. fantastic. amazing. ... is there any other words to describe... i am totally speechless... can't wait for next chappy to be up! :D
2arrowheadwonderful. interesting. nice. fantastic. amazing. ... is there any other words to describe... i am totally speechless... can't wait for next chappy to be up! :D
3/9/2003 c6 20Xelena
i like it a lot. especially how she can so vividly imagine the forest- fading is basically like teleporting i gather. please continue. what's Mischa's power again? or does she not have one? i've forgotten.
20Xelenai like it a lot. especially how she can so vividly imagine the forest- fading is basically like teleporting i gather. please continue. what's Mischa's power again? or does she not have one? i've forgotten.
3/6/2003 c6 no-more-account
I really like what you did with Louise ^^. Pretty crafty. Keep up the good work! It's brillant so far ^^.
I really like what you did with Louise ^^. Pretty crafty. Keep up the good work! It's brillant so far ^^.
2/7/2003 c5 no-more-account
Wow! This story is brillant down to the very last word. Please keep on writing! I'm very curious on what Louise is going to do to Hazel and Mischa.
Wow! This story is brillant down to the very last word. Please keep on writing! I'm very curious on what Louise is going to do to Hazel and Mischa.