for Rebirth7/11/2007 c7 Amaquieria
Lovely...absolutely charming! You must update again soon. ^_^
Lovely...absolutely charming! You must update again soon. ^_^
6/11/2004 c7 
10A Different Kind of Yellow
Wow! I'm really loving this! All these famous Renaissance artists! We're doing the same period in Music at the moment. When you mentioned st. Peter's Balisca, it took me back to the book I'm reading at the moment..all about the Vatican City and Rome. It's called 'Angels and Demons' by Dan Brown, I highly recommend it for someone who is baseing a story in Italy. Please could you review my two most recent stories, as I would love to know what you think, as you are a much better writer than I am, thank you. ~ Kirsty.
10A Different Kind of YellowWow! I'm really loving this! All these famous Renaissance artists! We're doing the same period in Music at the moment. When you mentioned st. Peter's Balisca, it took me back to the book I'm reading at the moment..all about the Vatican City and Rome. It's called 'Angels and Demons' by Dan Brown, I highly recommend it for someone who is baseing a story in Italy. Please could you review my two most recent stories, as I would love to know what you think, as you are a much better writer than I am, thank you. ~ Kirsty.
5/28/2004 c7 Curiousmind
when are you going to finish the next chapter?...please finish it as soon as possible!i enjoy your story very much!infact,i think it's one of the best stories in fictionpress!
when are you going to finish the next chapter?...please finish it as soon as possible!i enjoy your story very much!infact,i think it's one of the best stories in fictionpress!
5/2/2004 c7 33metropolis noir
I really like this story a lot. It is a little fantastical, but in a good way.
A little advice would be to use what are called addressee commas. In dialogue, this is important, since a comma is where a pause would be.
Also, I think if you could keep the story in Amanda's perspective, it would be awesome. That way we're as surprised as she is when, for example, we learn of Machiavelli's proposal.
But, as not to end this on a critical note, I really, really like the way this storyline is unfolding. The Luther angle is intriguing.
33metropolis noirI really like this story a lot. It is a little fantastical, but in a good way.
A little advice would be to use what are called addressee commas. In dialogue, this is important, since a comma is where a pause would be.
Also, I think if you could keep the story in Amanda's perspective, it would be awesome. That way we're as surprised as she is when, for example, we learn of Machiavelli's proposal.
But, as not to end this on a critical note, I really, really like the way this storyline is unfolding. The Luther angle is intriguing.
4/25/2004 c6 Corelli's Prodigy
Please, continue this story. I think that it is really well written and interesting. one question though, how the hell is Amanda getting away with mouthing of to everyone and keping her reputation intact?
Corelli's Prodigy
Please, continue this story. I think that it is really well written and interesting. one question though, how the hell is Amanda getting away with mouthing of to everyone and keping her reputation intact?
Corelli's Prodigy
3/6/2004 c6 7Lady Ezri
yeahs! I fianlly found the story again! I found your story orignally..while..um, I was in programing class, not doing my work (typing out code gets boring after awhile) anyways...I love it! it's funny, and i love the people are...much fun...
7Lady Ezriyeahs! I fianlly found the story again! I found your story orignally..while..um, I was in programing class, not doing my work (typing out code gets boring after awhile) anyways...I love it! it's funny, and i love the people are...much fun...
3/6/2004 c6 Frankenstein Jr
Finally, its here...
Ai yoh! Why so short again? Anyway, nice..nice story. Please continue. Also, like the complex thoughts of Amanda judging Michelangelo. You wrote it well.
But then again, wonder if all women make decisions that quickly. Nevertheless, Ammanda must be really bright; cunning too - obvious to say.
Finally, its here...
Ai yoh! Why so short again? Anyway, nice..nice story. Please continue. Also, like the complex thoughts of Amanda judging Michelangelo. You wrote it well.
But then again, wonder if all women make decisions that quickly. Nevertheless, Ammanda must be really bright; cunning too - obvious to say.
3/6/2004 c6 6georgie b
so disapointed theres no chapter 7! i really like your witty conversations. and what a gather of people! hehe update soon!
6georgie bso disapointed theres no chapter 7! i really like your witty conversations. and what a gather of people! hehe update soon!
3/6/2004 c6 eponine42
OMG! This is really amazing. Please countinue, because I want to know what happens next.
OMG! This is really amazing. Please countinue, because I want to know what happens next.
3/5/2004 c6 4Wolfi
YAY! Another Chapter...I love it. It is a wonderful story, though however I have heard of Raphael being more kind than that...And he also admired Michaelangelo. But keep on writing it your way cause this is interesting...and one doesn't really know what personalities they had since they have been dead for 500 years.
4WolfiYAY! Another Chapter...I love it. It is a wonderful story, though however I have heard of Raphael being more kind than that...And he also admired Michaelangelo. But keep on writing it your way cause this is interesting...and one doesn't really know what personalities they had since they have been dead for 500 years.
12/27/2003 c5 Nadia20
:-O It can't stop there! Noo! I'm really liking this so far, although I do wonder how all of the men seem to know who she is even though she hasn't been there for long. Keep going, though! I can't wait to read more!
:-O It can't stop there! Noo! I'm really liking this so far, although I do wonder how all of the men seem to know who she is even though she hasn't been there for long. Keep going, though! I can't wait to read more!
11/19/2003 c5 8VortexofPain
Your story is magnificent. I love it. I hope you write more soon. I'll be waiting!
8VortexofPainYour story is magnificent. I love it. I hope you write more soon. I'll be waiting!
11/13/2003 c5 4Wolfi
Woah! This is one Kick-arse story. I love it!
There was A LOT of people at that ball...de Medici...Columbus...R.Shakespear...Michelangelo..
..Raphael...
4WolfiWoah! This is one Kick-arse story. I love it!
There was A LOT of people at that ball...de Medici...Columbus...R.Shakespear...Michelangelo..
..Raphael...
9/21/2003 c5 Emily Logan
This is a really good idea, and story line. The only thing is is that it seems that Amanda doesn't have any real flaws other than nerves, which anyone going back five hundred years in time would face. She is capturing the interest of everyone, and no one of the time is able to see her for the fraud that she is, seemingly not even her servants, so, perhaps something should be done to her to make her a little less perfect...i don't know, tho...it IS a really good idea, tho. keep going!
This is a really good idea, and story line. The only thing is is that it seems that Amanda doesn't have any real flaws other than nerves, which anyone going back five hundred years in time would face. She is capturing the interest of everyone, and no one of the time is able to see her for the fraud that she is, seemingly not even her servants, so, perhaps something should be done to her to make her a little less perfect...i don't know, tho...it IS a really good idea, tho. keep going!
9/19/2003 c5 3FrankensteinJr
I don't think you have to ask us to be kind and review, because we'll review anyway.
You really got great imagination.
Shrug.. if only, we all would have learn history this way.
Please be kind and update.
3FrankensteinJrI don't think you have to ask us to be kind and review, because we'll review anyway.
You really got great imagination.
Shrug.. if only, we all would have learn history this way.
Please be kind and update.