for Rebirth8/30/2003 c1 Concetta
This story is SO awesome! I'm hoping to read tons more! This story is really well written too! VIVA ITALIA!
Ciao, amica mia!
This story is SO awesome! I'm hoping to read tons more! This story is really well written too! VIVA ITALIA!
Ciao, amica mia!
8/19/2003 c5 
150SpawnMeister666
Interesting...very interesting!
I have to admit I'm not really into art. Although this time yesterday I wasn't into poetry either and I've written 4 poems since!
Anyway, although I'm not really into the whole art scene, I do like your story, and am looking forward to reading the next installment sometime soon.
Keep up the good work.
Spawny
150SpawnMeister666Interesting...very interesting!
I have to admit I'm not really into art. Although this time yesterday I wasn't into poetry either and I've written 4 poems since!
Anyway, although I'm not really into the whole art scene, I do like your story, and am looking forward to reading the next installment sometime soon.
Keep up the good work.
Spawny
7/24/2003 c5 Wandering but not lost
Hey, this is a really cool story, keep it up!
Hey, this is a really cool story, keep it up!
7/10/2003 c5 LisEv
Excellent as usual. I particularly enjoyed this chapter, listening in on her mingling with such people is very interesting.
Excellent as usual. I particularly enjoyed this chapter, listening in on her mingling with such people is very interesting.
7/6/2003 c1 14matt15086
This is my favorite story! you did a great job! I was wondering if you can review my story called Earth is under attack. Thanks!
Bye
14matt15086This is my favorite story! you did a great job! I was wondering if you can review my story called Earth is under attack. Thanks!
Bye
6/9/2003 c1 Yuffie-san
I see you haven't updated this in a while...but please, you have to continue this! I just love it! One of my favorite stories, that's for sure!
see ya*
P.S.: please? pretty please?^_^
I see you haven't updated this in a while...but please, you have to continue this! I just love it! One of my favorite stories, that's for sure!
see ya*
P.S.: please? pretty please?^_^
5/10/2003 c4 25faery tragedy
I really like this. Amanda is a good character, and I like how she reacts in certain situations. The story itself is unwoved very well. You have talent as a storyteller. I'll be looking for more!
*Faery Tragedy
25faery tragedyI really like this. Amanda is a good character, and I like how she reacts in certain situations. The story itself is unwoved very well. You have talent as a storyteller. I'll be looking for more!
*Faery Tragedy
1/30/2003 c3 LisEv
Hee, hee :-) I think I like where this is going. LOL!
One thing - you could benefit a bit from using commas more. For example: "yes, my lady" feels more... I don't know, flowing, less rushed, than "yes my lady". In my ever so humble opinion :-).
Update ASAP, I love this story!
Hee, hee :-) I think I like where this is going. LOL!
One thing - you could benefit a bit from using commas more. For example: "yes, my lady" feels more... I don't know, flowing, less rushed, than "yes my lady". In my ever so humble opinion :-).
Update ASAP, I love this story!
12/14/2002 c1 Guest
I like it! My only nitpick: you should use more commas, just to make everything more flowing.
I like it! My only nitpick: you should use more commas, just to make everything more flowing.
12/12/2002 c3 AndrewB
That was a lot of fun :) And hooray for a story where Michaelangelo isn't a turtle...
That was a lot of fun :) And hooray for a story where Michaelangelo isn't a turtle...