for Cupid's Arrow12/16/2017 c36 Acie
Wait, wait, wait... Lemme get this straight. You (the author of the story, not the person reading the comments), gave us that amazing plot twist and then decided to leave us hanging for 7 years? Dude, come back and finish what you started!
Wait, wait, wait... Lemme get this straight. You (the author of the story, not the person reading the comments), gave us that amazing plot twist and then decided to leave us hanging for 7 years? Dude, come back and finish what you started!
10/13/2016 c36 
6masterofcharacters
Im sorry. I dont know when you last posted but this story is amazing. Ive read it all starting from yesterday afternoon. Im really confused. Is Anteros physce and eros child in their previous life? And now is their brother in a way because Thats what aphrodite adopted her grandchild? Is that right? Anyways im sad that im done reading what is here and id love it if you would continue the story.
6masterofcharactersIm sorry. I dont know when you last posted but this story is amazing. Ive read it all starting from yesterday afternoon. Im really confused. Is Anteros physce and eros child in their previous life? And now is their brother in a way because Thats what aphrodite adopted her grandchild? Is that right? Anyways im sad that im done reading what is here and id love it if you would continue the story.
8/13/2015 c36 Guest
Ah this is such an amazing story! Still faithfully waiting for an update (or even your summary of what would've happened had you finished it) :D
Ah this is such an amazing story! Still faithfully waiting for an update (or even your summary of what would've happened had you finished it) :D
6/26/2015 c36 4fyriagita
I can't believe that you make Anteros as their child! God.
I wish you overcame the uneasines of writing soon. i love reading your stories. your imagination never ceased me :")
4fyriagitaI can't believe that you make Anteros as their child! God.
I wish you overcame the uneasines of writing soon. i love reading your stories. your imagination never ceased me :")
3/1/2015 c36 augmentedDREAMS
No! Why haven't you updated in so long!? This story is an absolute masterpiece! God! Why is it that always the good ones get abandoned!?
I loved this story through every step. It is so hard to find a story with which you can agree at every step. I felt so connected with Eros and Thera. At times I got so absorbed in the story that it took me a moment to realize that it wasn't real and that it wasn't actually unfolding in front of my eyes. The prose, the dialogue, the emotions... Everything was just perfect. Please, PLEASE come back and finish this story!
No! Why haven't you updated in so long!? This story is an absolute masterpiece! God! Why is it that always the good ones get abandoned!?
I loved this story through every step. It is so hard to find a story with which you can agree at every step. I felt so connected with Eros and Thera. At times I got so absorbed in the story that it took me a moment to realize that it wasn't real and that it wasn't actually unfolding in front of my eyes. The prose, the dialogue, the emotions... Everything was just perfect. Please, PLEASE come back and finish this story!
12/13/2014 c36 Guest
Hey! I just recently read your story and I love it! I hope it isn't finished yet. Still hoping for you to continue writing. :)
Hey! I just recently read your story and I love it! I hope it isn't finished yet. Still hoping for you to continue writing. :)
6/10/2014 c36 The World is a Blanket
Omg this story is absolutely amazing! Is it abandoned? I really really hope not!
Omg this story is absolutely amazing! Is it abandoned? I really really hope not!
8/28/2013 c36 Umsanalocality
Come on this cannot be the end now, can it? I was really enjoying the story so please update soon.
Come on this cannot be the end now, can it? I was really enjoying the story so please update soon.
6/30/2013 c1 VanillaSeen
I loved this story, I wished that you could continue! Its story line is fantastic! I think that if you don't want to continue it, you should give it to someone to continue or redo! Anyway, I loved it. I hope it one day will be fully finished!
-PinkPastaPianoAngel
I loved this story, I wished that you could continue! Its story line is fantastic! I think that if you don't want to continue it, you should give it to someone to continue or redo! Anyway, I loved it. I hope it one day will be fully finished!
-PinkPastaPianoAngel
6/7/2013 c36 jshd
Aww great story bt i was lokkin forward to their ..union..
Aww great story bt i was lokkin forward to their ..union..
4/1/2013 c36 ofxallxthexthings
I only recently stumbled upon this story and really liked the general idea of it . I really liked what you did with it an d honestly I didn't expect Anteros to be their child. Of course I don't really k now that much of greek mythology... But anyways, just some suggestions that I th ink would make this story better. First, I would say to go into a little more de pth when you're describing things. I was a little confused at some points, and I 'm not sure if this was done on purpose, but you would allude to something, but never really touch on it, then like a fe w sentences later you would clarify... L ike when Thera saw Eros' wings for the f irst time. I think a little more detail could be given about that. Another sugge stion is about continuity. I know it's h ard to keep things straight sometimes wh en writing over long periods of time. Bu t for instance, in one chapter you said Thera's hair was cut short and choppy, a lluding that she generally would wear it down, then just a few chapters ago, you said that she always wears it in a low ponytail. Also with the dog. I feel like it was mostly important that Romeo died and brought Eros and Thera closer toget her, i understand that. But I think you should have spent a little more time tal king about the dog overall. I mean, it w as almost like all of a sudden there was just and god. Then with the new dog, we never really hear about it. I know it's just a minor character, but for the emp hasis that was put on it earlier, i thin k followup constancy is a good thing. Ov er all, I enjoyed this story. Thank you for sharing it! i hope you continue writ ing it! I would love to see how it ends!
I only recently stumbled upon this story and really liked the general idea of it . I really liked what you did with it an d honestly I didn't expect Anteros to be their child. Of course I don't really k now that much of greek mythology... But anyways, just some suggestions that I th ink would make this story better. First, I would say to go into a little more de pth when you're describing things. I was a little confused at some points, and I 'm not sure if this was done on purpose, but you would allude to something, but never really touch on it, then like a fe w sentences later you would clarify... L ike when Thera saw Eros' wings for the f irst time. I think a little more detail could be given about that. Another sugge stion is about continuity. I know it's h ard to keep things straight sometimes wh en writing over long periods of time. Bu t for instance, in one chapter you said Thera's hair was cut short and choppy, a lluding that she generally would wear it down, then just a few chapters ago, you said that she always wears it in a low ponytail. Also with the dog. I feel like it was mostly important that Romeo died and brought Eros and Thera closer toget her, i understand that. But I think you should have spent a little more time tal king about the dog overall. I mean, it w as almost like all of a sudden there was just and god. Then with the new dog, we never really hear about it. I know it's just a minor character, but for the emp hasis that was put on it earlier, i thin k followup constancy is a good thing. Ov er all, I enjoyed this story. Thank you for sharing it! i hope you continue writ ing it! I would love to see how it ends!
1/7/2013 c36 2SweetNothingness
WHAT?! WHY DID IT END?!
You have explaining to do, missy. I've just read through 36 chapters why the interlude :'( C'mon.. C'mon! Oh my god I feel like my favourite TV series has been cut off at a cliffhanger.
DUDE please, please, next chapter.
2SweetNothingnessWHAT?! WHY DID IT END?!
You have explaining to do, missy. I've just read through 36 chapters why the interlude :'( C'mon.. C'mon! Oh my god I feel like my favourite TV series has been cut off at a cliffhanger.
DUDE please, please, next chapter.
1/3/2013 c36 A plea
Please please update if you can, even just one chapter to say how you would have ended it. This story is beautiful and I'm so sad to not know how it would end.
Please please update if you can, even just one chapter to say how you would have ended it. This story is beautiful and I'm so sad to not know how it would end.