for Cupid's Arrow6/22/2007 c3 zakei
hmms. i should reread the first chapter. haha. i'm vaugely lost. :x great writing anyway.
hmms. i should reread the first chapter. haha. i'm vaugely lost. :x great writing anyway.
6/12/2007 c34 
5Dirty White Belt
Oh mah jeeze! This story is so god! You must continue because you're only one of the most interesting writers on fictionpress. Good job!
5Dirty White BeltOh mah jeeze! This story is so god! You must continue because you're only one of the most interesting writers on fictionpress. Good job!
5/19/2007 c34 Mal
i know you said that you were going on permanent hiatus, but i have to say that really sucks. i'm sure there's a more elegant way of saying it, but i'm sorry. it just sucks.
this story is amazing, and the plot line is not something you see very often, if ever. i don't think you messed up the story at all, and even up to the last updated chapter, i was still very interested.
i really hope you get the inspiration to finish the story. though i know where you're coming from. writing it started as something fun, but after a while, it just becomes boring and annoying. i'm sure that's something most writers have been though.
basically, my point, thanks for giving me a few hours away from real life. and even if you choose not to finish it, this is still one of the best stories i've come across.
i know you said that you were going on permanent hiatus, but i have to say that really sucks. i'm sure there's a more elegant way of saying it, but i'm sorry. it just sucks.
this story is amazing, and the plot line is not something you see very often, if ever. i don't think you messed up the story at all, and even up to the last updated chapter, i was still very interested.
i really hope you get the inspiration to finish the story. though i know where you're coming from. writing it started as something fun, but after a while, it just becomes boring and annoying. i'm sure that's something most writers have been though.
basically, my point, thanks for giving me a few hours away from real life. and even if you choose not to finish it, this is still one of the best stories i've come across.
5/2/2007 c34 3moneymakestheworldgoround
WOW. i love this story! WE! XD
*adds to faves (and alerts)
update ASAP! ^^
3moneymakestheworldgoroundWOW. i love this story! WE! XD
*adds to faves (and alerts)
update ASAP! ^^
5/2/2007 c34 jonboblee
*ROAR*may all the monsters from Olympus decends upon you if you do not update soon!
Zeus' lightning bolt will struct you now as it's been one year or more since you last updated.
Poseidon trisula will lanced into your body if you do not read my review!
~
Hiks,pls!update!i don't care if the chapter makes no sense just update!
btw,i voted for thera to get her memories back first...
*ROAR*may all the monsters from Olympus decends upon you if you do not update soon!
Zeus' lightning bolt will struct you now as it's been one year or more since you last updated.
Poseidon trisula will lanced into your body if you do not read my review!
~
Hiks,pls!update!i don't care if the chapter makes no sense just update!
btw,i voted for thera to get her memories back first...
4/11/2007 c34 3Krystal Nickle
Ah! Please, Please, Please, Please update this story. I'm absolutely in love with it and I really want to know what's going to happen and where he's taking her. Is it their house on the mountain? And you're writing is so good. I am kind of a snob when I read, I guess. If there are too many mistakes or if the writing style is poor, I just stop reading, no matter the story. As you can see, I haven't stopped reading this because the actual story isn't the only thing that is interesting but also your style. I like how you start some converstaions and you don't yet know who the POV person is talking to except by how you write so you can guess. Then you add names. It is an interesting technique, even if it tends to happen a little too frequently to really be appreciated. Anyway, I'm begging you to update. Actually, I checked to see when the last time you did update was to see if you just stopped writing this story or something and freaked out a little. You see, I saw the 12-8-02 date first and was so sad since it looked like you had long since given up this wonderful story. But then I looked again in my shock and noticed it said "published" right next to that and I breathed a sigh of relief. The point is...you're story is great, you should seriously think about publishing it since it is pretty dang original, and PLEASE PLEASE WITH A MILLION SWEDISH FISH AND RED M&M's update! Thanks!
3Krystal NickleAh! Please, Please, Please, Please update this story. I'm absolutely in love with it and I really want to know what's going to happen and where he's taking her. Is it their house on the mountain? And you're writing is so good. I am kind of a snob when I read, I guess. If there are too many mistakes or if the writing style is poor, I just stop reading, no matter the story. As you can see, I haven't stopped reading this because the actual story isn't the only thing that is interesting but also your style. I like how you start some converstaions and you don't yet know who the POV person is talking to except by how you write so you can guess. Then you add names. It is an interesting technique, even if it tends to happen a little too frequently to really be appreciated. Anyway, I'm begging you to update. Actually, I checked to see when the last time you did update was to see if you just stopped writing this story or something and freaked out a little. You see, I saw the 12-8-02 date first and was so sad since it looked like you had long since given up this wonderful story. But then I looked again in my shock and noticed it said "published" right next to that and I breathed a sigh of relief. The point is...you're story is great, you should seriously think about publishing it since it is pretty dang original, and PLEASE PLEASE WITH A MILLION SWEDISH FISH AND RED M&M's update! Thanks!
3/31/2007 c16 19jekodama
Rachael is the Queen of the Biatches of the world. I'm sure she's the head of the sindicate too.
19jekodamaRachael is the Queen of the Biatches of the world. I'm sure she's the head of the sindicate too.
3/31/2007 c10 jekodama
I searched information about Anteros in several books and in Wikipedia, and they say that he is the love of requited love, not unrequited.
"In Greek mythology, Anteros (Αντερως / Anterôs) is the god of requited love, literally "love returned," and also the punisher of those who scorn love and the advances of others, or the avenger of unrequited love."
Is your version a license you're taking to play a part in your story? if so, it's understandable, but if not, then I suggest you to change the Author's Note you posted on Chapter 10.
In no way I intend this review to be offensive or anything of the sort. I just got confused and thought that I should let you know.
Until the next review!
I searched information about Anteros in several books and in Wikipedia, and they say that he is the love of requited love, not unrequited.
"In Greek mythology, Anteros (Αντερως / Anterôs) is the god of requited love, literally "love returned," and also the punisher of those who scorn love and the advances of others, or the avenger of unrequited love."
Is your version a license you're taking to play a part in your story? if so, it's understandable, but if not, then I suggest you to change the Author's Note you posted on Chapter 10.
In no way I intend this review to be offensive or anything of the sort. I just got confused and thought that I should let you know.
Until the next review!
3/15/2007 c1 Lyona
I'm not sure if you'll read this - but I hope that you know that this site is all about making mistakes and remaking your writing with every new chapter. I hope you aren't stopping writing because some people don't know how to give good constructive criticism. I want to tell you, I looked forward to reading this story, because it felt unique and interesting (even if you say weren't sure where it was going). I could feel the pull of the story, and it was a really interesting adaptation of a fable, especially one I hadn't seen before. I hope you get back writing soon, and if you need any help brainstorming or anything, you can always ask!
I'm not sure if you'll read this - but I hope that you know that this site is all about making mistakes and remaking your writing with every new chapter. I hope you aren't stopping writing because some people don't know how to give good constructive criticism. I want to tell you, I looked forward to reading this story, because it felt unique and interesting (even if you say weren't sure where it was going). I could feel the pull of the story, and it was a really interesting adaptation of a fable, especially one I hadn't seen before. I hope you get back writing soon, and if you need any help brainstorming or anything, you can always ask!
3/13/2007 c34 Verasque
I know you're on hiatus.. but I just wanted to tell you CONGRATULATIONS on winning 'Most Creative Plot' and 'Best Fantasy/Sci-Fi' for this story at the SKoW Awards! =] I hope one day in future some inspiration might strike and you'll continue on with Cupid's Arrow.
I know you're on hiatus.. but I just wanted to tell you CONGRATULATIONS on winning 'Most Creative Plot' and 'Best Fantasy/Sci-Fi' for this story at the SKoW Awards! =] I hope one day in future some inspiration might strike and you'll continue on with Cupid's Arrow.
3/7/2007 c34 12Dream Enigma
I might have reviewed once using my made-up name of starreader, but why haven't you updated!
I've waited these past few years hoping that you would update one of these days.
Really, I loved this story from the beginning and it would be a great shame if you didn't keep going.
Do you know how hard it is for a story like this to be found for readers of 'quality'? This radiates originality and a freshness that is good to myths and legends that are so overwritten. This is something like professionally written (although I'll have to admit there would have to be changes...) say, have you thought of publishing this?
Ok I'm rambling...the purpose of this 'review' was for me to plead, kick your butt, and order you to keep writting this.
Its just that I've read this years ago and I want to keep reading it. I wasn't lying when I said I read the update the day it came out and I'm still waiting.
I'm all for Thera to get with Eros, and I think Eros should get his memory back first, but Thera should have the memory flashes first...does that make sense?
Well, continue writting whatever you chose to do with this amazing talent of yours!
Cheers!
12Dream EnigmaI might have reviewed once using my made-up name of starreader, but why haven't you updated!
I've waited these past few years hoping that you would update one of these days.
Really, I loved this story from the beginning and it would be a great shame if you didn't keep going.
Do you know how hard it is for a story like this to be found for readers of 'quality'? This radiates originality and a freshness that is good to myths and legends that are so overwritten. This is something like professionally written (although I'll have to admit there would have to be changes...) say, have you thought of publishing this?
Ok I'm rambling...the purpose of this 'review' was for me to plead, kick your butt, and order you to keep writting this.
Its just that I've read this years ago and I want to keep reading it. I wasn't lying when I said I read the update the day it came out and I'm still waiting.
I'm all for Thera to get with Eros, and I think Eros should get his memory back first, but Thera should have the memory flashes first...does that make sense?
Well, continue writting whatever you chose to do with this amazing talent of yours!
Cheers!
3/5/2007 c34 Serena
I love the originality of the story and how you're breaking cliches. I don't like however, how apparently obvious the greek origins are (with all the brothers having greek god names, etc. yet nobody knows where they are from) and I hate how Eros is hot but yet still SO STUPID and continues to lie to her. I guess that's his job but I guess this is supposed to prove that he's worth it, right? Keep up the good work though.
I love the originality of the story and how you're breaking cliches. I don't like however, how apparently obvious the greek origins are (with all the brothers having greek god names, etc. yet nobody knows where they are from) and I hate how Eros is hot but yet still SO STUPID and continues to lie to her. I guess that's his job but I guess this is supposed to prove that he's worth it, right? Keep up the good work though.