for Hidden Trust Within the Enemy5/8/2004 c11 
26pneumothorax
hmm. it seems to have started lacking, it's a little repetative but good luck working on the new chapter if you ever get it up lol. but who I am to talk, i left mine 5 months XP
26pneumothoraxhmm. it seems to have started lacking, it's a little repetative but good luck working on the new chapter if you ever get it up lol. but who I am to talk, i left mine 5 months XP
5/8/2004 c7 pneumothorax
interesting. i suppose it's a good way to get rich of michelle without getting grief from rachel over it. wahey .. or whatever.
interesting. i suppose it's a good way to get rich of michelle without getting grief from rachel over it. wahey .. or whatever.
5/8/2004 c3 pneumothorax
ooh, intruiging. this is an unfinished story right? oh well, i'll read it anyway,
ooh, intruiging. this is an unfinished story right? oh well, i'll read it anyway,
7/13/2003 c11 4Melody1
Lol, don't worry about not having updated early. I uh, I haven't updated in a ridiculously long time. Writer's block is horrible. Mine's gone though, now I'm just being lazy. I'm glad that you finally revealed how Shane died. THat was so sad... I hadn't been expecting that at all. It wasn't her fault though. And wait, who exactly is Randall. I"m sure that you mentioned it, but my brain isn't functioning. I hope you update sooner than I usually do. That's fair, isn't it? Um, oh hehehe, I'm famous. Wow, look at that, and I had no idea.
4Melody1Lol, don't worry about not having updated early. I uh, I haven't updated in a ridiculously long time. Writer's block is horrible. Mine's gone though, now I'm just being lazy. I'm glad that you finally revealed how Shane died. THat was so sad... I hadn't been expecting that at all. It wasn't her fault though. And wait, who exactly is Randall. I"m sure that you mentioned it, but my brain isn't functioning. I hope you update sooner than I usually do. That's fair, isn't it? Um, oh hehehe, I'm famous. Wow, look at that, and I had no idea.
6/13/2003 c10 Bottledinsideme
Are you that happy that I reviewed? lol...i must say its been a long time since the story was updated so I forgot who the heck Randall was...I'm like WHAT? cuz he popped out of nowhere...at least now we know how come she's like this...great chapter though
Are you that happy that I reviewed? lol...i must say its been a long time since the story was updated so I forgot who the heck Randall was...I'm like WHAT? cuz he popped out of nowhere...at least now we know how come she's like this...great chapter though
6/7/2003 c10 4Melody1
Me and my novels are famous? No way! I'm not really famou, am I? I didn't think I was. Lol, but anyway I was so excited when I saw that you updated. It had been a while so I read about five chapters to refresh myself... But it's still awesome and totally captivating and all that jazz. I hope you update a wee bit quicker next time...but I can't really talk since I haven't updated in over a month... yeah, I'm real sorry about that. Yeah... I've written like two and a half pages. I have...at least two and half to go. Sorry... I have the worst writer's block ever, I hate jumping into a plot when I have no idea where it's going. It always leads to this. And now I'm totally going on a tangent about me, that's so bad. About this chapter... The chap explained my questions and I'm totally excited about finding out about the death thing. I feel so bad for her though...I kind of expected Shane to be a ss hole-y, but I'm happy that he's not. I should end my rambling, sorry aboutt the length. I hope you update son!
~Mel~
4Melody1Me and my novels are famous? No way! I'm not really famou, am I? I didn't think I was. Lol, but anyway I was so excited when I saw that you updated. It had been a while so I read about five chapters to refresh myself... But it's still awesome and totally captivating and all that jazz. I hope you update a wee bit quicker next time...but I can't really talk since I haven't updated in over a month... yeah, I'm real sorry about that. Yeah... I've written like two and a half pages. I have...at least two and half to go. Sorry... I have the worst writer's block ever, I hate jumping into a plot when I have no idea where it's going. It always leads to this. And now I'm totally going on a tangent about me, that's so bad. About this chapter... The chap explained my questions and I'm totally excited about finding out about the death thing. I feel so bad for her though...I kind of expected Shane to be a ss hole-y, but I'm happy that he's not. I should end my rambling, sorry aboutt the length. I hope you update son!
~Mel~
5/20/2003 c9 Summer1
Too lazy to login. LOL.
Cool story.
Well, Michelle deserved to be dumped. Ha. And Carmen's pretty cool. But she's so difficult! And Jordan's sweet. But he's so cocky sometimes!
Hehe. I like the characters.
It's well written.
They're cool. :) Keep updating!
Too lazy to login. LOL.
Cool story.
Well, Michelle deserved to be dumped. Ha. And Carmen's pretty cool. But she's so difficult! And Jordan's sweet. But he's so cocky sometimes!
Hehe. I like the characters.
It's well written.
They're cool. :) Keep updating!
5/14/2003 c9 15x-Laurie-x
Great chapter once again. Please update again when ever you have the time... Hope your life picks up again soon. xx
15x-Laurie-xGreat chapter once again. Please update again when ever you have the time... Hope your life picks up again soon. xx
4/20/2003 c9 4Melody1
Hey. I really like your story. I'm like addicted to it. It's so entertaining. I'm a little confused though, probably cause I'm dumb, but wait, did Carmen actually kill Shane? I don't think she did, but I think I'm missing something. Anyway, I like Carmen. I can totally empathize with her. That totally sucks. And her mom is so mean. And whoa! Rachel and Michelle...psycho jealous bitches. What's up with that. They're not gonna hurt Carmen again, now that Jordan broke up with Michelle... for being a jealous psycho bich. That is so mean. Lol, sorry... I'm ranting. I really like this plot though. I hope you update again soon.
4Melody1Hey. I really like your story. I'm like addicted to it. It's so entertaining. I'm a little confused though, probably cause I'm dumb, but wait, did Carmen actually kill Shane? I don't think she did, but I think I'm missing something. Anyway, I like Carmen. I can totally empathize with her. That totally sucks. And her mom is so mean. And whoa! Rachel and Michelle...psycho jealous bitches. What's up with that. They're not gonna hurt Carmen again, now that Jordan broke up with Michelle... for being a jealous psycho bich. That is so mean. Lol, sorry... I'm ranting. I really like this plot though. I hope you update again soon.
4/20/2003 c9 Bottledinsideme
so here i am...stuck...having to wait for the next chapter.sighs.good...now he broke up...who the heck was that guy who hugged her? Definitely not Shane...or is he a ghost? I doubt it...
so here i am...stuck...having to wait for the next chapter.sighs.good...now he broke up...who the heck was that guy who hugged her? Definitely not Shane...or is he a ghost? I doubt it...