for My Angel8/16/2004 c1 
28Diana Shore
Very powerfull, emotion filled piece. I'm truly speechless and don't know what else to say.
Take care, D.
28Diana ShoreVery powerfull, emotion filled piece. I'm truly speechless and don't know what else to say.
Take care, D.
7/8/2004 c1 17shadow-spirit
its is lovely. really honest. really bleak. really genuine! it realy comunicates ur pain, regret and indesision. it really is beautifully loveingly guilty also the image 'angel in heaven' is very emotive. i like it
17shadow-spiritits is lovely. really honest. really bleak. really genuine! it realy comunicates ur pain, regret and indesision. it really is beautifully loveingly guilty also the image 'angel in heaven' is very emotive. i like it
1/13/2004 c1 6Nallasariel the Weeper
Wow... That was gorgeous. I can't relate, since I'm not even out of Middle School yet, but that was beautiful... Keep writing poetry, and I'm sorry for your loss...
Please R&R my stories as well... They aren't nearly as good, but please read them anyways...
Namarie,
*`~Nallasariel the Weeper
6Nallasariel the WeeperWow... That was gorgeous. I can't relate, since I'm not even out of Middle School yet, but that was beautiful... Keep writing poetry, and I'm sorry for your loss...
Please R&R my stories as well... They aren't nearly as good, but please read them anyways...
Namarie,
*`~Nallasariel the Weeper