for Crumbling1/25/2003 c1 Jinx
Passion and emmotion run deep through this piece and I love the subtle twist at the end and the power of the last line. This shows your great strength of character and I am in awe as usual.
Passion and emmotion run deep through this piece and I love the subtle twist at the end and the power of the last line. This shows your great strength of character and I am in awe as usual.
12/21/2002 c1 
12kittylover16
I like this a lot. I especially like the ending. It's a contrast to the rest of the poem. Keep up the good work! (Thanks for reviewing You Think You Know Me?)!
12kittylover16I like this a lot. I especially like the ending. It's a contrast to the rest of the poem. Keep up the good work! (Thanks for reviewing You Think You Know Me?)!
12/13/2002 c1 27unloved
is this about nick? just the fact you said you were missing them and it hurts,i fooled myself it may had been me.
27unlovedis this about nick? just the fact you said you were missing them and it hurts,i fooled myself it may had been me.
12/11/2002 c1 cutiegirraffe802
I liked it alot. That reminded me of my past. I liked three boys over the past year and they all eventually turned me down. That really hurt!:(
But what can you do? That's why I'm moving on. Thanks for the insperation!:)
I liked it alot. That reminded me of my past. I liked three boys over the past year and they all eventually turned me down. That really hurt!:(
But what can you do? That's why I'm moving on. Thanks for the insperation!:)
12/11/2002 c1 Transparent Eyes
LOL! This is great, it reminds me of a telegraph or something. Hello I'm fine I miss you . I could just hear the sarcasm in the poem when you said..."Well, that's nice of you." Wonderful, wonderful.
LOL! This is great, it reminds me of a telegraph or something. Hello I'm fine I miss you . I could just hear the sarcasm in the poem when you said..."Well, that's nice of you." Wonderful, wonderful.