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11/11/2007 c1 613DiaRose
Hmm, a bit too repetetive for my taste, but I like it. It feels like reading the thoughts of a young girl. Lovely.

Love,

~Dia
3/31/2005 c1 36Akhenaten
good question... in a metaphorical way...
3/25/2005 c1 49ApplesCM
You wrote this when you were in 7th grade? Its really good. You used the word ice alot in it, but I do believe it works. :)
10/2/2004 c1 47Kenishiro
neat, how cool is that? how do you came up with that?nice!
4/18/2004 c1 14Shy Violet Fae
It's a bit hard to read since it's in a straight line and it flows a little weirdly.
11/26/2003 c1 30Roadside Dryer
Good.
11/23/2003 c1 63Taka and Keichirou
one long sentence,...

its actually quite good...i've never seen it like this...different...nice

T
11/16/2003 c1 18Indecisive
Great poem!
8/21/2003 c1 3Angerona
hearts are made of fire ice

becuse the ice is logical heart

and the fire is the passion

great work

kinda short but creative non the less

~Angerona the Goddess of DEath~
6/23/2003 c1 25XxFrozenFlamExX
Is that a sentence or a poem? Come on, make it more longer and descriptive!
6/19/2003 c1 Anon
Completly understandable poem. Written with such enthusiasm. U r a great writter! Keep writing b/c I can't wait to read more of what u make! And I am really sorry! You know who this is! When u find out come get me online or in person sometime!
6/13/2003 c1 17Killer Fang
Your poem is kind of confusing and I don't really understand it unless u r saying that your heart is buring but hard as ice! I need some explanation! Pleadse don't take this offensivley!
1/28/2003 c1 30LittleMaggie
The layout was a bit skewed, but the poem itself is really good. It's not the best i've seen here, but it's definetaly HEADS above most of the garbage on here.

Good poem :-)
1/12/2003 c1 6Kat Hawkins
come on, people. i'm not THAT bad a writer, am i?
12/13/2002 c1 AaZz
cool

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