for My Paper Heart11/23/2005 c2 jacia
i really like the setting. how do yo pronounce her name? well anyway i really like her character its so original!
i really like the setting. how do yo pronounce her name? well anyway i really like her character its so original!
7/2/2005 c18 
4DeliciousAmbiguity
Noo..IT'S OVER? You should most definitely make a sequel! Great job on this!
4DeliciousAmbiguityNoo..IT'S OVER? You should most definitely make a sequel! Great job on this!
4/21/2005 c12 Mindy
YAY!
This is reall cute, and even though there are a few grammer errors, it's not enough to ruin the plot.
...even if it is cliche. =P
YAY!
This is reall cute, and even though there are a few grammer errors, it's not enough to ruin the plot.
...even if it is cliche. =P
4/20/2005 c6 Mindy
does Lucky go to their school?
is anna her nickname?
i'm confused.
does Lucky go to their school?
is anna her nickname?
i'm confused.
1/3/2005 c19 8bemused scribbler
i LOVED your story! it was so sweet, and the drama was great! haha. you're characters had so much...character. haha. they were really great. i want a sequal! nah you're right this story is its own story and it was really good. i loved reading it. i would have reviewed on every chapter, but then it would have taken longer to read! well, im off to read your other work. great job!-silent rain
8bemused scribbleri LOVED your story! it was so sweet, and the drama was great! haha. you're characters had so much...character. haha. they were really great. i want a sequal! nah you're right this story is its own story and it was really good. i loved reading it. i would have reviewed on every chapter, but then it would have taken longer to read! well, im off to read your other work. great job!-silent rain
12/2/2004 c19 sucker4romance
ah i need a sequal!i loved that story it...rocked like whoa. just wow it was fabluous! it made me cry cuz it reminded me of wehn middle school ended and i had to say goodbye to all my friends cuz dey werent going to my bleh catholic skool. please put a da sequel soon! byee
ah i need a sequal!i loved that story it...rocked like whoa. just wow it was fabluous! it made me cry cuz it reminded me of wehn middle school ended and i had to say goodbye to all my friends cuz dey werent going to my bleh catholic skool. please put a da sequel soon! byee
9/16/2004 c19 sieg45
good story... but why did u end it lol... it's ok... just leaving ur poor readers at a cliched line lol
good story... but why did u end it lol... it's ok... just leaving ur poor readers at a cliched line lol
6/22/2004 c19 azcourtney
hey i really liked your story. To bad you aren't going to write a sequl. Just remeber it would probably be something people would want to read! I know i would.hehe. maybe you could re-consider it maybe? But you know whats best! Keep on writing!
hey i really liked your story. To bad you aren't going to write a sequl. Just remeber it would probably be something people would want to read! I know i would.hehe. maybe you could re-consider it maybe? But you know whats best! Keep on writing!
5/29/2004 c19 4StarCounter
I read this story so long ago, and then lost track of it. But I loved it. For a high school romance, it's damn good. I'll add onto this review once I remember what I wanted to say, but until then, know that it was a fun read. *thumbs up*
-Erin ^_^
4StarCounterI read this story so long ago, and then lost track of it. But I loved it. For a high school romance, it's damn good. I'll add onto this review once I remember what I wanted to say, but until then, know that it was a fun read. *thumbs up*
-Erin ^_^
4/20/2004 c19 2ooies
Of course I'll review your other story but the thing is I'm not really sure which story your talking about but I'll review the latest updated one!
2ooiesOf course I'll review your other story but the thing is I'm not really sure which story your talking about but I'll review the latest updated one!
3/14/2004 c18 3Miss Meticulous
This is an amazing story... and the end is touching if not slightly bittersweet. Very good, and realistic ending. You have a talent for writing...and I would enjoy reading more of your stuff.
3Miss MeticulousThis is an amazing story... and the end is touching if not slightly bittersweet. Very good, and realistic ending. You have a talent for writing...and I would enjoy reading more of your stuff.
2/6/2004 c18 7barely broken
That was a great story. I cried! Oh my god I cried! Haha, yes, it was very good. You write well, I wish I could write as good as you.. but with some practice hopefully i'll get there. Waiting for a sequel.. and hoping it'll be as good as (or better than) this one. You put a lot of emotion in this story, and it was really easy to relate to. No complaints at all. Keep writing!
~AESP
7barely brokenThat was a great story. I cried! Oh my god I cried! Haha, yes, it was very good. You write well, I wish I could write as good as you.. but with some practice hopefully i'll get there. Waiting for a sequel.. and hoping it'll be as good as (or better than) this one. You put a lot of emotion in this story, and it was really easy to relate to. No complaints at all. Keep writing!
~AESP
2/5/2004 c18 8InsaneOleander
*sniffle* That's such a sad ending...I almost started crying when she started to leave...but when she was saying bye to Keeley, it reminded me of my friend who moved away and then I started crying... evil story...jkjk...I like your ending a lot! It's like..sad...and yet it's happy...because you know they're seeing each other again later...yay! great story! ^^
8InsaneOleander*sniffle* That's such a sad ending...I almost started crying when she started to leave...but when she was saying bye to Keeley, it reminded me of my friend who moved away and then I started crying... evil story...jkjk...I like your ending a lot! It's like..sad...and yet it's happy...because you know they're seeing each other again later...yay! great story! ^^
1/29/2004 c2 3diphenhydraminea
u seem like a pretty cool person, on with the kill... can i go and kill someone with you? lol
3diphenhydramineau seem like a pretty cool person, on with the kill... can i go and kill someone with you? lol
1/28/2004 c19 sillken silver berries
that's IT? you're ending it? you CAN'T! CAN'T CAN'T CAN'T CAN'T!
oivay...
breathe...calm...feel the air in your lungs...breathe...and exhale...
okay, i think i'm okay now
good grief. yes, i suppose that was a decent ending, kinda left me hanging though. i mean, i can see how it was actually i very good place to end it, but how depressing is that? i was all excited because one of my favourite stories had another update, and it was just a note telling me that the last chapter was just that, the last chapter. oivay.
anyway
nice ending btw. i suppose that's something i should say. cuz i actually liked it, now that i've had time to think about it and whatnot.
anyway (oi, that again, i'm far too repetitive), so i will look in on your other story (the new one), i promise, and we'll see if we like. (who's we? i'm confuzed...my brain is taking over...wait a minute, if that's my brain talking...then why is there a 'we'? oh i don't know...obviously my brain is a completely separate part from the rest of my body. it runs on its own terms. good grief, i'm getting WAY too into this...bye brackets!) ahh..much better
yes, i'm a freak.
this is the conclusion that my sister and i have come to.
don't you agree?
no?
really?
yay! there's someone out there, aside from my mother, who is obligated to love and encourage me, who does not think i'm a freak.
mind you...
no, you still don't think i'm a freak, and that's that.
that's all there is to it.
shut up, brain!
ANYWAY...so i'm going, before this stupid thing gets any longer.
good work in this story, i really loved it! it was an awesome fic! bye bye aeralie! and lucky, and ryan, and keeley, and all the cool boys that i missed...i love you all! i will miss your humour! *hug* loves,
*ssb
that's IT? you're ending it? you CAN'T! CAN'T CAN'T CAN'T CAN'T!
oivay...
breathe...calm...feel the air in your lungs...breathe...and exhale...
okay, i think i'm okay now
good grief. yes, i suppose that was a decent ending, kinda left me hanging though. i mean, i can see how it was actually i very good place to end it, but how depressing is that? i was all excited because one of my favourite stories had another update, and it was just a note telling me that the last chapter was just that, the last chapter. oivay.
anyway
nice ending btw. i suppose that's something i should say. cuz i actually liked it, now that i've had time to think about it and whatnot.
anyway (oi, that again, i'm far too repetitive), so i will look in on your other story (the new one), i promise, and we'll see if we like. (who's we? i'm confuzed...my brain is taking over...wait a minute, if that's my brain talking...then why is there a 'we'? oh i don't know...obviously my brain is a completely separate part from the rest of my body. it runs on its own terms. good grief, i'm getting WAY too into this...bye brackets!) ahh..much better
yes, i'm a freak.
this is the conclusion that my sister and i have come to.
don't you agree?
no?
really?
yay! there's someone out there, aside from my mother, who is obligated to love and encourage me, who does not think i'm a freak.
mind you...
no, you still don't think i'm a freak, and that's that.
that's all there is to it.
shut up, brain!
ANYWAY...so i'm going, before this stupid thing gets any longer.
good work in this story, i really loved it! it was an awesome fic! bye bye aeralie! and lucky, and ryan, and keeley, and all the cool boys that i missed...i love you all! i will miss your humour! *hug* loves,
*ssb