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12/16/2002 c1 16kaika switched
I was a bit skeptical when I read the summary...a gravedigger? But it was excellent, especially the last two lines. Wonderful work!
12/14/2002 c1 Tethys-Orion
this poem definitely has the seeds of greatness. I speak of the meter; though it is rough and unpolished and some of the phrasing awkward, the poet has a good ear for meter and a great sense of drama and organization. I like the last line best-"when you are the one to bury the dead/ there's no one to sprinkle dirt on your head/"

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