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8/26/2002 c1 jennerz
Keeps getting better and better. I can't wait to see where it goes.
1/30/2001 c1 3Pam S
THAT WAS GREAT! Write more!
11/28/2000 c1 Star
Okay...I like him. He's cool. Please write more! This is excelent!
11/20/2000 c1 jen
i like what you've done. you've cleaned it up a lot!
11/16/2000 c1 Star
Wow! I love it! Please write more!
11/16/2000 c1 3heart warden
Hmmmm, I like it . . . nice job with the real father business, that should turn out interesting! Keep going, I like this stuff!
11/15/2000 c1 Star
ohhhh...what will happen next?
11/14/2000 c1 heart warden
It looks like it's going to be a great story! One suggestion though: I'd consider proof reading or getting a beta reader to achieve a more polished feel. It's kind of rough-looking right now. Otherwise it's a very good story . . . I can see the plot going in many directions from here. Have fun with it, and please write more! You can't end it at such a sad part!
11/14/2000 c1 Kinkado
very interesting heather, sounds like it's going to be a great story...but write more! it's so sad right now!

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