Just In
Community
Forum
V
More
for The Wanderer

6/28/2004 c1 10Mobius Soul
This could be a good story. But it isn't because it isn't a story. It reads like an outline for a story you're planning. You need more details, descriptions of situations and characters, and dialogus to make it a real story-do some revising and it could be good.
1/1/2002 c1 Too Flashy
Hey that's pretty good! Hope to see more like that!
11/15/2000 c1 3heart warden
I like it! It's got a great story to it. It would be even better, though, if you could expand it. That way, you would become more attached to the characters and you'd care more when Merlin decides to stay with the princess, and it would flow more smoothly. But it's still a very good story!

Twitter . Help . Sign Up . Cookies . Privacy . Terms of Service