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2/27/2001 c1 The Alchemist
I don't really think this is a novel, but decent writing. I like your idea though. Well thought out. I think we all feel like this sometimes. You know, sometimes I think the road is the answer. I'm guessing you are trying for some kind of effect here, but one long sentence is a bit much. Try dividing your story out a little making it a bit easier on the reader.

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