for glass12/28/2002 c1 
14Alone in the Desert
A poem about cutting that is concise, not overly emotional, poignant and in good form. Congratulations, you achieved the highly unlikely. Anyhow, very well done and keep at it. I like how you mix the direct approach of "angst" poems with the imagery and liricism more common to haikus.
14Alone in the DesertA poem about cutting that is concise, not overly emotional, poignant and in good form. Congratulations, you achieved the highly unlikely. Anyhow, very well done and keep at it. I like how you mix the direct approach of "angst" poems with the imagery and liricism more common to haikus.
12/21/2002 c1 2PhoebeC
I love this! Reminds me of a song by an artist named Majandra... dark but beautiful ^_^ very nice! It's going into my favourites!
2PhoebeCI love this! Reminds me of a song by an artist named Majandra... dark but beautiful ^_^ very nice! It's going into my favourites!
12/19/2002 c1 36obsidian katana
wow...great haiku! i like it! how can pain be bliss? well, good job anyway! keep writing!
36obsidian katanawow...great haiku! i like it! how can pain be bliss? well, good job anyway! keep writing!
12/19/2002 c1 asilinsbud
wow! i really like your Haiku called glass! it is really deep and has a lot of meaning in my oppinion and i want to know how to submit a poem.
wow! i really like your Haiku called glass! it is really deep and has a lot of meaning in my oppinion and i want to know how to submit a poem.