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5/27/2003 c1 48Vinsant Firepsyched
I like how you can keep using the word 'when' before every sentence, except the last 2 of course. Though maybe you could elaborate, ride what? or ride for what purpose. Stating 'That is when we ride' just doesn't seem to satiate my thirst for understanding, or maybe it's just me... : ) Good job nonetheless.
4/9/2003 c1 Rini
very good poem, probes at the thinking part of your mind. Good job ^^
3/8/2003 c1 21Dryad
hey, its you! lol, I never knew who this was, and ya, you just told me. so yes. to cool of a poem, i really like it, it makes you think. very cool!
12/19/2002 c1 22Gevo
good poem!

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