for Unfinished3/4/2003 c1 Sophie J
Nice, the tone is really good and it gets the point across without seeming laboured. My problem with poetry is it always seems like i'm TRYING to write poetry instead of prose. When i should infact jsut give up and stick to prose :) your poetry has none of that kind of belaboured feel to it and is easy and natural to read :)
doesn't it suck that the best writers are usually the ones with few reviews?
Nice, the tone is really good and it gets the point across without seeming laboured. My problem with poetry is it always seems like i'm TRYING to write poetry instead of prose. When i should infact jsut give up and stick to prose :) your poetry has none of that kind of belaboured feel to it and is easy and natural to read :)
doesn't it suck that the best writers are usually the ones with few reviews?
12/29/2002 c1 pawzzz
Wow...that was...good. I like your poetry.
Wow...that was...good. I like your poetry.
12/19/2002 c1 
220Namir Swiftpaw
...awesome.
I really like the way this was written! What a beautiful piece of work.
Please keep writing.
~Namir Swiftpaw
220Namir Swiftpaw...awesome.
I really like the way this was written! What a beautiful piece of work.
Please keep writing.
~Namir Swiftpaw