for Fallen6/30/2003 c15 AikoShrek
Okay, holiday? x.x; ::Stay clam...don't panic:: I guess I can try to live without an update ::twitch:: x.o; Have fun and hopefully you'll think of more to write! ^_^;
Ja, Ne!
Okay, holiday? x.x; ::Stay clam...don't panic:: I guess I can try to live without an update ::twitch:: x.o; Have fun and hopefully you'll think of more to write! ^_^;
Ja, Ne!
6/30/2003 c15 
26Ever Be
oh i hope it's the latter as well. well, even if you think it's crap i'll prolly read and still love it! i'm glad that Alex finally had some happiness with Zayn. Ilo's going to die isn't he? you know that wouldd be very mean to take away Alex's best friend and lover! but you hold the pen and i can't wait to see what you bring back with you from your holiday! well i'll stop ranting now, can't wait til you get back!
26Ever Beoh i hope it's the latter as well. well, even if you think it's crap i'll prolly read and still love it! i'm glad that Alex finally had some happiness with Zayn. Ilo's going to die isn't he? you know that wouldd be very mean to take away Alex's best friend and lover! but you hold the pen and i can't wait to see what you bring back with you from your holiday! well i'll stop ranting now, can't wait til you get back!
6/30/2003 c15 mismatched
*scream* *faint*
of my god, i can hardly breathe! XD
woww.
and that reza...my gosh, looks like someone's PMSing, rofl.
*clap clap*
*scream* *faint*
of my god, i can hardly breathe! XD
woww.
and that reza...my gosh, looks like someone's PMSing, rofl.
*clap clap*
6/30/2003 c1 3Ran Ishikawa
Hi! Just saving our spot! We have stuff to do! We will review again later!
3Ran IshikawaHi! Just saving our spot! We have stuff to do! We will review again later!
6/30/2003 c14 I Wish You All the Best
Okay, this is gonna be a huge rant, so be ready:
First off, I hate Reza and Yahto. How DARE they mess with little Alex like that? Zayn should have fried their evil asses. I hate them! I hate them I hate them I hate them! AH!
Done there, now, for the Asha/Ilo thing. It was so cute, but then Ilo did the adult thing to do and told Asha to think about it. That was sweet, but still...*sniffle* And when Danika busted him I thought she was going to be mad! Who does she love? I didn't get that part!
I've noticed one thing that gets me: Ilo and Zayn are both 'running out of time' as they said at separate intervals. Meaning they're gonna die? Don't let them die, PLEASE don't let them die! Zayn can actually STOP the JUDGMENT wth a KISS! C'mon!
One part that I found strikingly ironic and grimly humorous was that Eadoin actualy said something like 'I'll eat crap as long as this building doesn't fall on us,' and lo and behold, it fell on them. I just hope everybody's okay...
This was LONG and now I feel bad for the people that read MY stuff cause it took me DAYS to do it! Good job, though. That was a LOT of stuff! Take care, and update as soon as you can!
~Xandra
Okay, this is gonna be a huge rant, so be ready:
First off, I hate Reza and Yahto. How DARE they mess with little Alex like that? Zayn should have fried their evil asses. I hate them! I hate them I hate them I hate them! AH!
Done there, now, for the Asha/Ilo thing. It was so cute, but then Ilo did the adult thing to do and told Asha to think about it. That was sweet, but still...*sniffle* And when Danika busted him I thought she was going to be mad! Who does she love? I didn't get that part!
I've noticed one thing that gets me: Ilo and Zayn are both 'running out of time' as they said at separate intervals. Meaning they're gonna die? Don't let them die, PLEASE don't let them die! Zayn can actually STOP the JUDGMENT wth a KISS! C'mon!
One part that I found strikingly ironic and grimly humorous was that Eadoin actualy said something like 'I'll eat crap as long as this building doesn't fall on us,' and lo and behold, it fell on them. I just hope everybody's okay...
This was LONG and now I feel bad for the people that read MY stuff cause it took me DAYS to do it! Good job, though. That was a LOT of stuff! Take care, and update as soon as you can!
~Xandra
6/27/2003 c14 16ola
!...!
wow...that was one hell of a story. and i mean that in the best possible way. you kept me reading way into the night (and i now have bloodshot eyes to prove it *grins*).
alex. lol. "protector of mankind"? yep. same for me. (well, seeing as i have that same name...and my sister's name come from "man'humanity" so i get to protect her. lol.)
i really liked the way you chose your names to signify thier character. and i also like your style. it's very different from all the other ones, although i couldn't tell you how.
i do hope you'll update very soon, for this is a really wonderful story.
16ola!...!
wow...that was one hell of a story. and i mean that in the best possible way. you kept me reading way into the night (and i now have bloodshot eyes to prove it *grins*).
alex. lol. "protector of mankind"? yep. same for me. (well, seeing as i have that same name...and my sister's name come from "man'humanity" so i get to protect her. lol.)
i really liked the way you chose your names to signify thier character. and i also like your style. it's very different from all the other ones, although i couldn't tell you how.
i do hope you'll update very soon, for this is a really wonderful story.
6/26/2003 c14 mismatched
AH! *faint* You're evil! You're pure evil, but it's awesome, an' I love it, rofl! I feel sorry for Asha. Aw! *hugs Asha* He's just CUTE I can't help it.
I go now. XD Can't wait 'til Chapter 15 comes out!
AH! *faint* You're evil! You're pure evil, but it's awesome, an' I love it, rofl! I feel sorry for Asha. Aw! *hugs Asha* He's just CUTE I can't help it.
I go now. XD Can't wait 'til Chapter 15 comes out!
6/24/2003 c14 2Laughing Cat
Well... just... wow. This was an amazing chapter, and so /long/! Your writing has grown even more impressive as you've gotten deeper into the story and I nearly caught myself crying once or twice during the chapter. Amazing job! ^_^
LC
2Laughing CatWell... just... wow. This was an amazing chapter, and so /long/! Your writing has grown even more impressive as you've gotten deeper into the story and I nearly caught myself crying once or twice during the chapter. Amazing job! ^_^
LC
6/24/2003 c14 26Ever Be
oh wow. that was amazing, i can't WAIT til there's more! you go so in depth with everything, your work is truly beautiful.
26Ever Beoh wow. that was amazing, i can't WAIT til there's more! you go so in depth with everything, your work is truly beautiful.
6/23/2003 c14 10Cinaed Born Of Fire
*eeps* Ack, poor Ilo! Poor Zayn! Save them, er... *thinks of someone to rescue them* Well, Alex would destroy everything trying to, so maybe Asha! As long as Yahto doesn't get involved... Then there's Danika, and everyone else is kinda mortal... *shakes head*
Gah, Danika depressed me. Why can't she and Leilani get together? *winks* Sorry, couldn't help myself.
Gah, I'm now gonna be bouncing on my heels for the next chapter! *whimpers* Don't rush it, but I still can't wait for the next edition of Fallen!
~Cinaed
10Cinaed Born Of Fire*eeps* Ack, poor Ilo! Poor Zayn! Save them, er... *thinks of someone to rescue them* Well, Alex would destroy everything trying to, so maybe Asha! As long as Yahto doesn't get involved... Then there's Danika, and everyone else is kinda mortal... *shakes head*
Gah, Danika depressed me. Why can't she and Leilani get together? *winks* Sorry, couldn't help myself.
Gah, I'm now gonna be bouncing on my heels for the next chapter! *whimpers* Don't rush it, but I still can't wait for the next edition of Fallen!
~Cinaed
6/23/2003 c9 mismatched
lol, this would be for a few chapters back, but the earth-born prince of hell. It sound really...I don't know. lol. it's like "Yeeah, I'm Alexis, I'm the earth born prince of Hell." ... it's sad. but REALLY funny. I don't know.
I just realised everyone was gay. lol. I'm slow, aren't I?
Yahto is my favorite character. I feel sorry for him. He isn't getting any.
lol. sorry. I side with characters for strange reasons.
Zayn reminds me somewhat of Luke Wilson.
lol, this would be for a few chapters back, but the earth-born prince of hell. It sound really...I don't know. lol. it's like "Yeeah, I'm Alexis, I'm the earth born prince of Hell." ... it's sad. but REALLY funny. I don't know.
I just realised everyone was gay. lol. I'm slow, aren't I?
Yahto is my favorite character. I feel sorry for him. He isn't getting any.
lol. sorry. I side with characters for strange reasons.
Zayn reminds me somewhat of Luke Wilson.
6/23/2003 c14 5Seirvitas
All I can say was...I was glued to the computer screen. I looked in my email..it said new chapter from edana...and inside it said new chapter to fallen...centi was really really happy. Oddly enough I can really relate to alex more than usually lately...I had a lil break down of my own...it was bad times. Anyways yeah this chapter has me really worried, YOU ARE JUST TOO EVUL TO YOUR CHARACTERS...but then again how can you have a good story without sufferring? Wonderful descriptions as usual, and the complexity of the plotlilne is what makes the story get better with every chapter. Everything about this story is wonderful and I'm not kidding when I say it is my favorite story ever. Write more...take your time if you must, and long chapters are ALWAYS welcome. You have amazing abilities and I commend you. I need to go now though cuz today just went bye far too fact. I love you!
~Centi
5SeirvitasAll I can say was...I was glued to the computer screen. I looked in my email..it said new chapter from edana...and inside it said new chapter to fallen...centi was really really happy. Oddly enough I can really relate to alex more than usually lately...I had a lil break down of my own...it was bad times. Anyways yeah this chapter has me really worried, YOU ARE JUST TOO EVUL TO YOUR CHARACTERS...but then again how can you have a good story without sufferring? Wonderful descriptions as usual, and the complexity of the plotlilne is what makes the story get better with every chapter. Everything about this story is wonderful and I'm not kidding when I say it is my favorite story ever. Write more...take your time if you must, and long chapters are ALWAYS welcome. You have amazing abilities and I commend you. I need to go now though cuz today just went bye far too fact. I love you!
~Centi
6/22/2003 c14 eternity-silenced
wai! *_* ASHA~! ILO~! but very long...O_O still...very good! once again, i congratualte u on another well written story...i envy you so much...*glare -_-;;
wai! *_* ASHA~! ILO~! but very long...O_O still...very good! once again, i congratualte u on another well written story...i envy you so much...*glare -_-;;
6/22/2003 c4 mismatched
This is ... undescribable. I'd say beautiful ... but it's so much more than that. It's giving me chills.
This is ... undescribable. I'd say beautiful ... but it's so much more than that. It's giving me chills.