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39Finwe
Wow! This is so incredibly descriptive! I have to admit, sometimes I get a little lost amongst all the descriptiveness, but it really is beautiful! Off to bed now, but will read more tomorrow. =^.^=
39FinweWow! This is so incredibly descriptive! I have to admit, sometimes I get a little lost amongst all the descriptiveness, but it really is beautiful! Off to bed now, but will read more tomorrow. =^.^=
12/26/2005 c24 17Cattails
Wow, this story was excellent! I just love how it's so dark, and so many bad things happen, but somehow it still has a happy ending! It also feels very realistic. I can't wait to read your third!
17CattailsWow, this story was excellent! I just love how it's so dark, and so many bad things happen, but somehow it still has a happy ending! It also feels very realistic. I can't wait to read your third!
12/18/2005 c20 Cattails
Yay, Ilo's back! Ack, Zayn's gone. You gain one, you lose one. After this is all over, I think all of the characters are going to need a nice long vacation.
Yay, Ilo's back! Ack, Zayn's gone. You gain one, you lose one. After this is all over, I think all of the characters are going to need a nice long vacation.
12/18/2005 c19 Cattails
I love this story, but it keeps tormenting my emotions! Geez. One moment, depression, the next happiness! Poor Asha...Cian's just a wee bit crazy, I think...
I love this story, but it keeps tormenting my emotions! Geez. One moment, depression, the next happiness! Poor Asha...Cian's just a wee bit crazy, I think...
12/18/2005 c17 Cattails
I hope Ilo doesn't stay dead! I like him! And how would Asha feel? Yahto's a fun demon, I must admit.
I hope Ilo doesn't stay dead! I like him! And how would Asha feel? Yahto's a fun demon, I must admit.
12/3/2005 c13 Rebecca
As always your writing is beautiful! I'm so glad I was introduced to these stories. The flow of the word really captures you in the moment. ^.^very fluffy!
As always your writing is beautiful! I'm so glad I was introduced to these stories. The flow of the word really captures you in the moment. ^.^very fluffy!
8/23/2005 c24 pink raine
since u begged so hard for a thought here it is. zayn's a whole other person from in eadoin. thaz good. this was fantastic and you did a great job. i still like eadoin more. probably will be my fave cus idande is such a beautiful charater. and what is it with u and evil children? i suppose their is soething devastating abt a childlike being full of wickedness. well i'm off to read mikaili. god knows when i'll finish it.
since u begged so hard for a thought here it is. zayn's a whole other person from in eadoin. thaz good. this was fantastic and you did a great job. i still like eadoin more. probably will be my fave cus idande is such a beautiful charater. and what is it with u and evil children? i suppose their is soething devastating abt a childlike being full of wickedness. well i'm off to read mikaili. god knows when i'll finish it.
4/11/2005 c9 Kitsune Luver
Hahahahahaha! It is so weird reading about Eadoin from someone else's view. And Alex doesn't know any of the story about the new people he is meeting. So weird! Oh well, I cracked up during this chapter! Eadoin's reaction was classic when he came into the room. I seriously laughed for five minutes! Awsome chapter. I know this story is already finished, but I felt compelled to review this chapter. Luv u lots
Hahahahahaha! It is so weird reading about Eadoin from someone else's view. And Alex doesn't know any of the story about the new people he is meeting. So weird! Oh well, I cracked up during this chapter! Eadoin's reaction was classic when he came into the room. I seriously laughed for five minutes! Awsome chapter. I know this story is already finished, but I felt compelled to review this chapter. Luv u lots
4/8/2005 c24 9Silver Daratraz
You're definitely one of the best writers I've looked up in fiction press. Have you ever tried publishing your stuff or are they meant to be anonymous.
Good work- hardly no spelling or grammar problem that i can catch. *smiles* that's a compliment. Normally i can catch a lot from someone i read here. and that's saying something.
love this series.
9Silver DaratrazYou're definitely one of the best writers I've looked up in fiction press. Have you ever tried publishing your stuff or are they meant to be anonymous.
Good work- hardly no spelling or grammar problem that i can catch. *smiles* that's a compliment. Normally i can catch a lot from someone i read here. and that's saying something.
love this series.
9/3/2004 c24 4KitsuneAkai13
gah! another wonderful fic. *drools* i luv yur angels an' demons. i'm so happy everyone ended up okay too. r the chars gonna be in the next one? that'd be cool. well great job again, of course i'm gonna read the next in the series. *waves* til then, ja ne!
4KitsuneAkai13gah! another wonderful fic. *drools* i luv yur angels an' demons. i'm so happy everyone ended up okay too. r the chars gonna be in the next one? that'd be cool. well great job again, of course i'm gonna read the next in the series. *waves* til then, ja ne!
7/15/2004 c24 1Rose Castello
this was the most beautiful fic i have read in a long time. Normally i don't like same sex stuff at all but this was just too good to ignore, so bravo
1Rose Castellothis was the most beautiful fic i have read in a long time. Normally i don't like same sex stuff at all but this was just too good to ignore, so bravo
7/8/2004 c1 Ephemeral Seraphim
Wow. The beginning is beautiful and ethereal. I love your writing style. May I grace you with a review? *sweeps into a graceful curtsy* Putting that aside, you are among one of the greatest writers I've seen on this site. I love how the words flow through your lyrical writing. The descriptions are simply wonderful, and the song captured the brilliance of the story. I wish to say more, but can't find anything else to say...I'm stunned. If only my story compared to yours, I'd be one of the happiest authors on earth. I'll read the next chapters, and I'm eager to read more.
Wow. The beginning is beautiful and ethereal. I love your writing style. May I grace you with a review? *sweeps into a graceful curtsy* Putting that aside, you are among one of the greatest writers I've seen on this site. I love how the words flow through your lyrical writing. The descriptions are simply wonderful, and the song captured the brilliance of the story. I wish to say more, but can't find anything else to say...I'm stunned. If only my story compared to yours, I'd be one of the happiest authors on earth. I'll read the next chapters, and I'm eager to read more.
7/6/2004 c24 Mei-Chan16
This story is great *gets teary eyed* I loved the ending who knew Jalen would help out lol. This is the third story I've read from you so far they're all great I was sort of dissapointed at not finding out who the guy fot Danika was but I guess there has to be some mysteries unless its answered in the third one *goes of to read*
This story is great *gets teary eyed* I loved the ending who knew Jalen would help out lol. This is the third story I've read from you so far they're all great I was sort of dissapointed at not finding out who the guy fot Danika was but I guess there has to be some mysteries unless its answered in the third one *goes of to read*
6/26/2004 c24 6LYK
Ah, this was as good as the first in the series! The characters were wonderful, and I really loved Asha and Ilo. Of course, it was great seeing Marcell and Kit again! Hell, it was great seeing everyone again. ^^ The action scenes leave me feeling so envious...I wish I could write action. Such a lovely story. Obviously, I'm going to have to get started on reading Mikaili!
6LYKAh, this was as good as the first in the series! The characters were wonderful, and I really loved Asha and Ilo. Of course, it was great seeing Marcell and Kit again! Hell, it was great seeing everyone again. ^^ The action scenes leave me feeling so envious...I wish I could write action. Such a lovely story. Obviously, I'm going to have to get started on reading Mikaili!