for Slave Narrative12/23/2002 c1 Closet Super Heroine
Very nice story, very nicely written. Seems to be very accurate as to how a slave might've been treated. One thing - could you possibly space out the paragraphs when you write? It's a whole lot easier on the eyes. That's all I have to say. Keep on writing and keep up the great work! ;)
Very nice story, very nicely written. Seems to be very accurate as to how a slave might've been treated. One thing - could you possibly space out the paragraphs when you write? It's a whole lot easier on the eyes. That's all I have to say. Keep on writing and keep up the great work! ;)