for Silent Guardians12/24/2002 c1 
33Alchera
Awesome. I sensed some David T. words! ACK! He's haunting me! Oh, sorry, inside joke... sorta. But hey, really cool poem. By the way, are you from Philly? I noticed in your profile it said 'go flyers' but hey, whatever. That's where I'm from too. Bai bai now, good poem.
~Elena
33AlcheraAwesome. I sensed some David T. words! ACK! He's haunting me! Oh, sorry, inside joke... sorta. But hey, really cool poem. By the way, are you from Philly? I noticed in your profile it said 'go flyers' but hey, whatever. That's where I'm from too. Bai bai now, good poem.
~Elena
12/23/2002 c1 7Daewen
Ah! I love the imagery! I like this image especially:
"horrific cacophony of society's
troublesome worries."
I love modifiers. ;)
7DaewenAh! I love the imagery! I like this image especially:
"horrific cacophony of society's
troublesome worries."
I love modifiers. ;)
12/22/2002 c1 7Pink Parka Girl
Yet another weird and bizarre poem...but I like it! It's creative and...well...has good rhythm and word choices (but sadly no lazy susans..-_-) Nice poem anyway! Write more!
7Pink Parka GirlYet another weird and bizarre poem...but I like it! It's creative and...well...has good rhythm and word choices (but sadly no lazy susans..-_-) Nice poem anyway! Write more!
12/21/2002 c1 176DefianceIsMe
I really enjoyed that. Great vocab usage and descriptions. I like angels...^_^
176DefianceIsMeI really enjoyed that. Great vocab usage and descriptions. I like angels...^_^
12/21/2002 c1 12Terra Tigra
Tigra: Very nice, I like ^.^" And that's saying something, depending on who you ask, of course. So poetic, so flowing, so melliflouous, so...so... well, I seem to have run out of adjactives at the moment but I'll get back to you on that. Mellifluous? How do I know what that word means? Hey, that's one of my vocab words! I did learn something new in school today, Mommy!
Pan: Oh no, who let Tigra on the computer again!
Tigra: Oh good, Pan, you're here! Read this poem isn't it good!
Pan: *reads poems* Yes, actally, it's very nice. But I thought we had decided you wouldn't review while you were on a sugar high.
Tigra: Did we? I must have forgotten.
Pan: Yes, we did. Now finish up.
Tigra: OK. Great poem. Thumbs! Keep up the good work!
Arrivederci!
-Terra Tigra- & -Pantera-
12Terra TigraTigra: Very nice, I like ^.^" And that's saying something, depending on who you ask, of course. So poetic, so flowing, so melliflouous, so...so... well, I seem to have run out of adjactives at the moment but I'll get back to you on that. Mellifluous? How do I know what that word means? Hey, that's one of my vocab words! I did learn something new in school today, Mommy!
Pan: Oh no, who let Tigra on the computer again!
Tigra: Oh good, Pan, you're here! Read this poem isn't it good!
Pan: *reads poems* Yes, actally, it's very nice. But I thought we had decided you wouldn't review while you were on a sugar high.
Tigra: Did we? I must have forgotten.
Pan: Yes, we did. Now finish up.
Tigra: OK. Great poem. Thumbs! Keep up the good work!
Arrivederci!
-Terra Tigra- & -Pantera-