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4/2/2019 c40 Smile
I really like and enjoyed reading it, though I think you could have write more,also you didn't Copley explain zack and james relationships and I was so much curious and also about the parents, BUT by the way I really appreciate your effort for complementing it however you mentioned that you lost interest it's really worthy,
THANK YOU
WOULD YOU continue writing?
My email: shinelilac3 at Gmail dot com
:-)
I really like and enjoyed reading it, though I think you could have write more,also you didn't Copley explain zack and james relationships and I was so much curious and also about the parents, BUT by the way I really appreciate your effort for complementing it however you mentioned that you lost interest it's really worthy,
THANK YOU
WOULD YOU continue writing?
My email: shinelilac3 at Gmail dot com
:-)
11/30/2018 c1 
3I'll Break Your Heart
This is great! I read it a long time ago, but I really wanted to thank you again for writing it! I hope you continue to write! You really have a talent. (-:
3I'll Break Your HeartThis is great! I read it a long time ago, but I really wanted to thank you again for writing it! I hope you continue to write! You really have a talent. (-:
4/7/2018 c40 Guest
OMG! Thank God you finished writing this story and shared it with us. I absolutely loved it! Though, I still wished there was more to the ending but all in all, it was absolutely amazing!
OMG! Thank God you finished writing this story and shared it with us. I absolutely loved it! Though, I still wished there was more to the ending but all in all, it was absolutely amazing!
1/13/2018 c40 Guest
Wow what a beautiful story...I simply love it...I didnt even want to do anything but read...
Wow what a beautiful story...I simply love it...I didnt even want to do anything but read...
9/9/2017 c40 1Lumix
Hello Mystified,
after reading a lot of Fanfictions and stories here on Fictionpress, I finally decided to create an account to favorise stories and write reviews. The biggest mistake an auther can make is to write a story which doesn't make sense or which has characters who make things no normal person would do or simply act unreasonable. Since one of my favorite genre/storyline is some romance with an adventure story in tow, your story looked perfect for me on the first glance. And your story didn't disappoint me. It had a compelling first chapter and I read your whole story within two days. The characters acted reasonable and the story didn't get boring and it didn't repeat itself. You deserve the nearly 2k favorites! The length of the whole story is perfect, but in my opinion it really needs an epiloge!
Thank you for writting it, I really enjoyed it. I just have one question: Does IDK mean "I don't know"?
Best wishes,
Lumix
1LumixHello Mystified,
after reading a lot of Fanfictions and stories here on Fictionpress, I finally decided to create an account to favorise stories and write reviews. The biggest mistake an auther can make is to write a story which doesn't make sense or which has characters who make things no normal person would do or simply act unreasonable. Since one of my favorite genre/storyline is some romance with an adventure story in tow, your story looked perfect for me on the first glance. And your story didn't disappoint me. It had a compelling first chapter and I read your whole story within two days. The characters acted reasonable and the story didn't get boring and it didn't repeat itself. You deserve the nearly 2k favorites! The length of the whole story is perfect, but in my opinion it really needs an epiloge!
Thank you for writting it, I really enjoyed it. I just have one question: Does IDK mean "I don't know"?
Best wishes,
Lumix
12/9/2016 c40 22shadowspirit
OMAGAWDDDDDDD! Your story was one of the best that I have ever read, the complex plot line, the twists, the characters, EVERYTHING! Great job!
OMAGAWDDDDDDD! Your story was one of the best that I have ever read, the complex plot line, the twists, the characters, EVERYTHING! Great job!
3/13/2016 c40 Avery young
Awesome plot .;-)Type your review here.
Awesome plot .;-)Type your review here.
9/2/2015 c39 kayden-sparks
Wow! I absolutely LOVED this story! I appreciate how well it was written. I love the characters, the action it was all great. I was worried Samantha was going to get a little Mary Sue, but you kept her strong, yet believable. I loved this story! I'd really love a story Zach as the main character. Love the bad boy *wink wink* Anyways just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed reading this. Thank you and good luck with any further writing!
Wow! I absolutely LOVED this story! I appreciate how well it was written. I love the characters, the action it was all great. I was worried Samantha was going to get a little Mary Sue, but you kept her strong, yet believable. I loved this story! I'd really love a story Zach as the main character. Love the bad boy *wink wink* Anyways just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed reading this. Thank you and good luck with any further writing!
9/2/2015 c40 kayden-sparks
Wow! I must say I absolutely LOVED this story. It was so well written and I really appreci
Wow! I must say I absolutely LOVED this story. It was so well written and I really appreci