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5/13/2003 c1 10A Stranger In The Mirror
okay.. let's get one thing straight.. I'm loving someone.. but I'm not numb, okay? In fact, I'm not numb at all.. I have got a ton of crushes and I am soo proud of it.. Yuck! Please, to all the people in the world, I'm a really bad influence when it comes to love..

this is one poem that should have been read to me when I was a nipper.. It really rhymes.. And it should have been in that "Mother Goose" collection of stories my mom bought for me when I was a lil tot.. Hehe! At least it makes sense.. And it's better to read and understand than those nutty "Jack and Jill" stories.. No one cares if Jack fell down the hill and broke his damn crown! Hell! He wasn't a king in the first place.. If he was part of royalty, what was he doing with Jill? Going on a date and creating that 'hill' thing as a diversion or just practicing their cartwheels down the hill so that they could be part-time court-jesters at the royal palace?

Just like what Marga said, this poem of yours really is fun to read.. And it rhymes too (for the enth time I said that!)... Is this another poem you wrote after you got annoyed with me telling you I found another crush? I was really wondering.. The feeling of it really sounds familiar...

Hmm.. Anyways, lemme think this one over.. I'll review your other poems while I figure that one out.. Okie?

God Made Coke

God Made Pepsi

But When God Made Duncan and James

DAMN! He Made Them Sexy

One Love,

Alyssa xx
1/2/2003 c1 17Alex'z Death Chic
Ha! The rhymes! Its line after line! I always knew you had it in you! This didn't suck ate alexis. Don't think that way! YOU'RE DISCOURAGING THE READERS!
12/22/2002 c1 3Lunaraine
love? okie...gets the idea. all your poems are sooo connected! eiyaa! write more dude!

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