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3/8/2011 c1 topyxyz
It's actually a great story. Wow, this is one of the oldest fanfics around!
7/10/2009 c1 4olgite the squidgal
No matter how much I wanted to hate your character, I thought there was still a chance that deep down inside, Harris was still a decent human being, and the ending proved it.

I don't have any quibbles with your story, except for one: I wish this could have been longer! I'd like to read about the telephone call to apartment 21D. :)
3/7/2006 c1 Captain Catch
I knew where this was going, but none the less your story was a nice one with quite the few mistakes.

You had a nice even flow, and included everything needed for a satisfying short story.
10/20/2002 c1 Lil1
Oooh...this was touching...so nice...wait..just one more story...Hey! You should write a novel and publish it, okay? Oh, I wish I'm as good as you! How do you do it?
1/22/2002 c1 anon
lovely story, you should be proud. :)
4/11/2000 c1 Halo
Good story line.. I liked it. I know this is going to sound picky, but you might want to watch your grammer.

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