4/13/2003 c1 Cliffe
Author:

Very vivid work you have here. I was slightly confused only near the end, but at the very end I understood everything.

What really gets me is the fact that you have not gotten any reviews. Why? I don't know. I have read stories that deserve reviews, and I have read stories that don't deserve reviews.

This story most definately deserves a few reviews. I hope that you read this sometime, but you have probably been discouraged from writing any more of this.

But I am very curious. So... If you ever have a free day, please, continue?