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6/27/2014 c1 Guest
Good story.
5/1/2003 c1 74LadyAnesta
awsome

i loved the story
3/20/2003 c1 6Talon Tearine
Aw... it's so cute! A fresh idea... not stale nor too original... great start. It makes you feel so cheerful inside. Hahaha... I'll be reviewing again when you next update! Good luck!
3/20/2003 c1 1Aurora Gabriev
I like your story... a little out of the ordinary.. but I like it! Keep writing!
2/17/2003 c1 1Ryoko Blue
Good start, weird with the bird king though?

continue i want to know what happens next

-ryoko
2/17/2003 c1 puck2
Heyhey!

What a cute story! It's really nice.

Thanks for reviewing my story, chapter two is up (Him, Her and Another), if you'd like to read more!

Keep up the good work,

-puck-
2/9/2003 c1 kt Dad
This story is the ways of god. It's very nice.
2/8/2003 c1 Bitter Berry
Oh dear, that was absolutely adorable. Too cute. ^_^

Thanks for reviewing my work. ^^

-Bitter B.
1/12/2003 c1 17baby-girl5
This is a really cute story. I like.
1/6/2003 c1 May
Such a nice lesson for naughty kids. Nice fic!
12/31/2002 c1 amm
this would be good for naughty kids.it's a fine work.
12/31/2002 c1 Aroonrak Thaenkom
fantastic.A bit sad.But it fun.
12/29/2002 c1 5Nonki
a sweet and simple one...perhaps it would get more interesting if you are able to pen down a more detailed dream of the boys... ^_^
12/27/2002 c1 Aroonrak Thaenkom
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