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5/13/2006 c1 NOTPOSTING
wow...
9/12/2004 c1 1Ckashid
Very well written, actually one of the best sex scenes I've read on this site. But I wish you went a little more into their relationships before diving in, readers clik one the story and it jumps right in. A good alteritive title for the story would be "SEX!"
lol, Please don't think I'm being mean. I'm just blabbering. Once again, you wrote this very well. I'm probably going to pick through some of your other works after this. See ya.
6/28/2004 c1 83Nails For Your Crucifix
*surprised* very erotic. However, not long enough. I look forward to reading more of your work. Nice job.
2/4/2003 c1 4starstruck1803
WOW. Keep writing, don't keep us all in suspense. it's cruel.
2/4/2003 c1 73Eternal Twilight
*eyes grow big* Aye carumba! So sweet, so erotic...I love it! Please write more...I enjoy reading a good heated sex scene. ;)

ps: thanks for reviewing my story! :)
2/1/2003 c1 1Star Of Silence
Good story...r u gonna add anymore to it?
1/17/2003 c1 20DarkPhantom0286
erotic, yet sweet...if that makes any sense at all
1/16/2003 c1 14CrimsonMisery
Wow, intense story. Very erotic! o.O
12/30/2002 c1 neo
i REALLY LIKED IT MABYE U AND ME COULD TRY IT OUT SOME TIME I WOULD REALLY ENJOY IT AND MABYE THINGS COULD HAPPEN BETWEEN US
12/28/2002 c1 james orellana
hey liz!great story loved it!i dont think there needs to be no changes! A few typos but other than that, great!hope u have more like these,he he he!:)

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