
9/23/2006 c1
15Amei666
Oh, god, that story was painful. I almost feel sorry for the guy...Especially if it was based on a true story :O

Oh, god, that story was painful. I almost feel sorry for the guy...Especially if it was based on a true story :O
12/31/2005 c1
10Thunder Goddes Kino
XD Oh my God...that was awesome...utterly awesome!
Old River sent me here to check it out, and I must say this was a worthwhile read. Poor Ron, what an awful birthday! ^ ^; Mew...but it was all nicely described, and I liked the little humor bits with the robbers, hehe. And the gang member winking and blowing the kiss x3 Hehe...the ending was a real nice happy clincher, despite Ron collapsing. But alas, a good story!

XD Oh my God...that was awesome...utterly awesome!
Old River sent me here to check it out, and I must say this was a worthwhile read. Poor Ron, what an awful birthday! ^ ^; Mew...but it was all nicely described, and I liked the little humor bits with the robbers, hehe. And the gang member winking and blowing the kiss x3 Hehe...the ending was a real nice happy clincher, despite Ron collapsing. But alas, a good story!
12/31/2005 c1 Old River
Willum ~
Dude that story was SO Friggin' funny, I was in stitches! Heck I'm still laughin' about it. I'll suggest this to my friends... they'll get a kick out of it!
Peace,Kaze
Willum ~
Dude that story was SO Friggin' funny, I was in stitches! Heck I'm still laughin' about it. I'll suggest this to my friends... they'll get a kick out of it!
Peace,Kaze
6/14/2005 c1
56whatsapenname
hehehe. i liked the dying duck analogy, the cat being fried, and the guy in the shadows wishing him a happy birthday. terribly depressing about him thinking it was kelly though. well done.
~whatsa

hehehe. i liked the dying duck analogy, the cat being fried, and the guy in the shadows wishing him a happy birthday. terribly depressing about him thinking it was kelly though. well done.
~whatsa
6/5/2005 c1
11breaker-one
That was a cute and funny story, although the ending was a tad cliche (the surprise party part, not Ron fainting). However I like your writing style.
It's my birthday tomorrow as well...here's hoping I have a better one than poor Ron.

That was a cute and funny story, although the ending was a tad cliche (the surprise party part, not Ron fainting). However I like your writing style.
It's my birthday tomorrow as well...here's hoping I have a better one than poor Ron.
7/23/2004 c1
26Endless Nightmares
It-s my birthday, so I thought I'd review this heh.
Well, Happy Freakin Birthday To Me! Heh

It-s my birthday, so I thought I'd review this heh.
Well, Happy Freakin Birthday To Me! Heh
7/5/2004 c1
51darkdreamerx
Hah...if my birthday was anything like that, I'd like wanna kill myself! Lol...nice job, I love how you write!

Hah...if my birthday was anything like that, I'd like wanna kill myself! Lol...nice job, I love how you write!
6/28/2004 c1 AllSmiles
And the last domino falls...
Good story. I laughed, cried, but mostly I laughed.
And the last domino falls...
Good story. I laughed, cried, but mostly I laughed.
6/16/2004 c1 Ayako Nazuki
Pretty good, I like it . . . Though this is about the most painful story I ever read about someone. :] Good work. Keep it up.
Pretty good, I like it . . . Though this is about the most painful story I ever read about someone. :] Good work. Keep it up.
3/27/2004 c1
5SilverFlame180
LoL, that was so great! I can't think of a single thing I would change. It was funny, you kept in character and dialogue, and it didn't lose my attention for a second. Great job. =)

LoL, that was so great! I can't think of a single thing I would change. It was funny, you kept in character and dialogue, and it didn't lose my attention for a second. Great job. =)
3/6/2004 c1
2CynicInLove
oh my god! lmao! poor ron..that was like the shitiest day u could ever imagine! and to think that he met the person his ex was cheating on, getting robbed, being 'air-kissed' by a male, getting his car impounded and other things...i felt so bad for him...lol. half of those things happen like once a year to someone. i guess he got the all in one day special. oh wow...this was some great humor! ending was classic! second chapter up? please?

oh my god! lmao! poor ron..that was like the shitiest day u could ever imagine! and to think that he met the person his ex was cheating on, getting robbed, being 'air-kissed' by a male, getting his car impounded and other things...i felt so bad for him...lol. half of those things happen like once a year to someone. i guess he got the all in one day special. oh wow...this was some great humor! ending was classic! second chapter up? please?