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1/13/2003 c1 7Ravenclaw42
Thank you enormously for the reviews on my poems. I like this one very much - it's a lot happier than what I tend to write. The imagery is beautiful; I can see the "blossoms that cloud the sky" very clearly in my mind. Plus I love the line about the sweet smell of earth - I love to know that I'm not the only person in the world who likes the smell of dirt. :)

Keep writing -

Further up and further in,

-Raven
1/11/2003 c1 franthephoenix
First of all, I want to thank you for your kind review of 'Waiting for Draco' - you made my day!

Now for my review: I really like this little poem. The language is so simple and yet it evokes such complex emotions, leaving the reader with a feeling of sheer bliss. I particularly liked the repetition and the lines:

"And all you have is but a faded memory of happier times

And all you have is the strength of despair"

in contrast with:

"As you fly into the warm open world around you

As you fly into the blossoms that cloud the sky"

Well done!

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