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9/9/2004 c1 3D-man98
I like it!
7/1/2004 c1 ICU2
morose, with a slightly off rhythm, but I liked it
8/9/2003 c1 15E. Goldstein
The supporting ideas were well thought out, which is something that most works on this site lack. Your writing is coming along nicely, but the language seems pushed a bit too much: namely the "she" in ll. 2 and 15. It speaks of a phony erudition which may deter potential readers.
1/7/2002 c1 2dingbats247
i really like the poem-one thing-i never really *get* the rhyming stuff

why does anyone rhyme their poems?

anyhoo here's some stuff i tries to put in the fish review and it didn't work-i'll try it here-
1/1/2002 c1 48Vinsant Firepsyched
You have described it in a very vivid way, but I;m sorry to say that I don't really understand.
10/6/2001 c1 Bella Tragedia
Great job! I love all of the metaphors!
4/18/2001 c1 Nicola
Great use of language, I knwo that because I dont understand it!
11/18/2000 c1 1dLQ77
That was amazing! very very good!

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