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1/17/2001 c1 jo
okay, for some reason this one really creeps me out... very well done
12/20/2000 c1 15Opal Soul
Good imagery, but once again, the ending was a bit weak. I don't quite understand why a mother was moaning, but then again, I'm tired. Anyway, endings are tricky things. I know they're what I struggle with [Look, bad grammar!] in my poems.

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