for Legends Üíïéãìá Anoigma3/19/2003 c3 
1Mikael Angelique
Hello! Long time no read, ne? '-'
Okay. This is my FIRST signed-in review EVER on either ff.net or fp.net, so I feel really special, and so should you! ^^;;
Anyway, I am really in love with your writing style (it's so descriptive and mature!) and this story is a perfect example of A+-term-paper-quality-writing! I think that it's very wonderful!
The usage of words in other languages was intruiging; it gave it more of an eithical feel, and emphasises how Japanese parts of it are. Good. A litle hard to follow, because I don't know Japanese, but it was still very very cool. '-'
There were many names used, but it all made sense, so go figure. ^^
I love how you ended it; kind of suspenseful, and kind of fulfilling. It was great! And I liked your allusion to the Slayers. ^^;;
Thanks for writing a great story!
Sincerely,
~Mikael Angelique 0:)
1Mikael AngeliqueHello! Long time no read, ne? '-'
Okay. This is my FIRST signed-in review EVER on either ff.net or fp.net, so I feel really special, and so should you! ^^;;
Anyway, I am really in love with your writing style (it's so descriptive and mature!) and this story is a perfect example of A+-term-paper-quality-writing! I think that it's very wonderful!
The usage of words in other languages was intruiging; it gave it more of an eithical feel, and emphasises how Japanese parts of it are. Good. A litle hard to follow, because I don't know Japanese, but it was still very very cool. '-'
There were many names used, but it all made sense, so go figure. ^^
I love how you ended it; kind of suspenseful, and kind of fulfilling. It was great! And I liked your allusion to the Slayers. ^^;;
Thanks for writing a great story!
Sincerely,
~Mikael Angelique 0:)
3/17/2003 c1 Guest
Whoa! this story is alot different than I'd expect, but it's realy really really really cool! I think that you really REALLY NEED TO WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER so that I can bask in its glory once more! ^-^
I mean, I'd read chapter 3 and review it, but these Imacs at school are not working and showing the page completely, so every thing's choppy and makes no sense and all the coding shows and eack macs suck!
Anyway, this is really really good, and expect another two revies sometime (I fergot to review for chapter 1) and then chapter 3 tonight on my computer.
Anyway, back on the review!
I like how you described the action and the characters, and I like your usage of other languages in the story, as always, because it shows the multi-cultureness and well-written-ness of it all.
To many nesses. Anyway, it was really increadibly cool and if you don't write more you will die a horrible guresome death (sometime in the near future)! and that goes with Legends, too! ^-^
-Luke the MaNiAc
Whoa! this story is alot different than I'd expect, but it's realy really really really cool! I think that you really REALLY NEED TO WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER so that I can bask in its glory once more! ^-^
I mean, I'd read chapter 3 and review it, but these Imacs at school are not working and showing the page completely, so every thing's choppy and makes no sense and all the coding shows and eack macs suck!
Anyway, this is really really good, and expect another two revies sometime (I fergot to review for chapter 1) and then chapter 3 tonight on my computer.
Anyway, back on the review!
I like how you described the action and the characters, and I like your usage of other languages in the story, as always, because it shows the multi-cultureness and well-written-ness of it all.
To many nesses. Anyway, it was really increadibly cool and if you don't write more you will die a horrible guresome death (sometime in the near future)! and that goes with Legends, too! ^-^
-Luke the MaNiAc
1/14/2003 c1 Marleeissa-chan
Cooooooooolios! That was really awesome, Keebs! One minor thing: baka yaro = you bastard, kisama = you (bastard). More commonly said than amao yaro or whatever you used. But it was overall good, and your usage of words from other cultures *Japanese* was very good. Added a unique flair. ;p
-Marissa Conners
Cooooooooolios! That was really awesome, Keebs! One minor thing: baka yaro = you bastard, kisama = you (bastard). More commonly said than amao yaro or whatever you used. But it was overall good, and your usage of words from other cultures *Japanese* was very good. Added a unique flair. ;p
-Marissa Conners
1/6/2003 c1 Reisi
ok, I'm vaguely diturbed, but only cuz i went from Nameless to this. Lemme tell you, its a rather large transfer...
I loved it, especially that guy when he said "bodily lust!" It made me laugh, or rather the picture in my mind made me laugh...
So, bRAVO! You found away to amaze, daze and thrill me whilst mildly disturbing me...
ok, I'm vaguely diturbed, but only cuz i went from Nameless to this. Lemme tell you, its a rather large transfer...
I loved it, especially that guy when he said "bodily lust!" It made me laugh, or rather the picture in my mind made me laugh...
So, bRAVO! You found away to amaze, daze and thrill me whilst mildly disturbing me...